Comments of Egoism Heat

Very cute, cleansed my soul, ending kinda rushed

meh but also surprisingly r*pe by a female

Female rape male somehow confusing

I expected this to be your basic smut omegaverse with the stereotypical plot but no. This got dark and this got wholesome and happy and crazy. I love it, i love them. I love how this ended, however I’m mad that that woman didn’t get charged with anything. That was horrible to read bro, I love how realistic it was portrayed, like how shoma was afraid of touch after that because usually somehow grape scenes somehow always get solved by more sex but with their loved on im most BLs. But still bro, that was horrible to read, i felt so deeply for him after that, you lose a part of yourself when that type of thing happens. It makes you go crazy in your mind. I am so glad he had kanata. Idk if it was just me but the kanata’s heart condition kinda felt random, maybe coz i don’t relate to it i felt like it was a very shallow plot point. I guess it did strengthen their relationship in the end but could have definitely been better. Overall though, this was a masterpiece, people don’t understand that the portrayal of grape is important because art is meant to comfort the disturbed and disturb the comforted. Otherwise no one would ever understand what it’s like and the weight of the issue. I hope shoma, kanata and manabu live happily ever after together forever.

Dropped at ch1

10/10 if it wasn't for this bitch alpha uugh

Omegaverse with lost potential

So cute but, overused trope

This was a short cute story

i felt dumb reading this maybe im js tired but i was lost for some time

It's interesting enough

Alpha x Omega. Romance. Love It

this sucks ass big time

I love everything about this story. The rape was done realistically. I always hated the stories where they miraculously save the guy just a second away from penetration, so I feel it takes away from the whole experience because he “didn’t actually get raped” so it’s okay. But no! He got raped, and the bitch got beat up, and the rape aftermath was so realistic. The guy was SPIRALING. Like, it was beautifully done and was making me so fucking sad. 10/10 writing.

And the development of Shoma learning to relax, smoke less, be cared for. Even the top (got forbid I remember his name) learning to be able to support himself and others, and facing the reality of his heart issues. Manning up to inform Shoma and stop being scared (being scared is fine, the importance is telling your partner these things). Ugh, I love growth. Even the growth in myself, because I was so close to dropping this story at the beginning, but then it became gold.

I mean, drama is something I usually get sick of because it’s either the same thing over and over, or it’s over exaggerated. But him CRYING ON HIS ABORTION PAPERS??? That bitch had me in tears. ToT

Love this, love you if you appreciate the writing of this, KUDOS

Shoma Otsuki's an omega and an office worker of marrying age. He's set up in an arranged marriage with a skilled alpha female and just goes along with the flow in a relationship with her. However, Shoma can't bring himself to take the big step, and when he gets drunk one night, he bumps into a mysterious alpha male named Kanata Tachibana and asks him to pretend to be his lover so that he can call the arranged marriage off. But, when they unexpectedly fall for each other's scent, they sleep together and Shoma finds that his life is now tied to Kanata's. This surprising relationship between the two changes them in various ways... This is an omega-verse yaoi story full of love and hatred brought to you by newcomer Itsu Takumi..

28/2/24 21:36
i fcuking cried nigga wtfff the kid manabu is so cute help bitch

fuck the other alpha.

okay what the flip! erm i didn’t expect the alpha chick to rape the uke ╥╥ and i’m only giving it a three stars cause the couples cute ig

No the Blondie literally pisses me off like idc if u have some condition or smth he literally put babies inside of the black hair and had the AUDACITY TO LEAVE like IK the black hair kicked him out but literally u can’t just leave him bro. He was suffering cause u we’re so damn horny (also the mpreg is crazyyy gang) but its pretty good ig..

Um some of the scenes and commentary where completely unneeded