this is the worst thing I ever read, and not because is a sad or shocking story, but because it's really bad written and I don't get the charas and in the end I didn't know if I have to laugh or cry. I laughed just in case.
//★// Ch.1 of Yami Bl Anthology (Psychological Dark-Themed BL Anthology) Warning :: Throat-cutting suicide / Sex with Corpse His Lover got assaulted & trauma until can't be touched. ➽ IMO If he can even kill that rapist, he should've fight back, not let him assault till becoming traumatic & end up like this.
w...WHAT?!? Ok so i’m here for some psychological thrillers or horror type comics but this is just... so poorly written and totally rushed. It should at least has some more chapters about their relationship so it’s makes the ending more devastating and crazy, idk?? Also maybe change some of character’s personality, but over this story could’ve been really interesting. Disappointed but at least they tried for a plot. Almost makes me wanna rewrite it...
Definitely not for everyone but I really like it. It made me cry and it was somewhat beautiful in the most fucked up way. It's very short but beautiful
Definitely not for everyone but I really like it. It made me cry and it was somewhat beautiful in the most fucked up way. It's very short but beautiful
BLOOD • WARNING Spoilers : if it were longer, it could have been traumatizing but it wasn't. I actually felt really sad for them, because they both died and can't continue their story. His step father raped him which gave him extreme OCD, and he can't be touched yet he wants to have sex with his childhood friend and lover so he told him to do it once he's dead, which he did before he killed himself too.
This one shot is very poorly written. It seems the author was trying a Romeo and Juliet thing with the suicide but failed terribly at making even me, a super emotional person, feel little to no emotion at all for the characters. The characters might as well have been dolls because of how much personality they lacked.