Comments of Grab the Stars

cute but the uke is kinda…

short and sweet <3 loved it

ch4 dropped boring

i liked this one!! novelist keeps coming to a bar to go home with a bartender

Mid..? No further backstories ? Why was the seme so eager to not go home? Plot hole? The had some trauma of relationships I get it but you can't brush it off ass if he didn't ghost you from August to December dude !!!! You can't forgive right away it's sure he would do it again damn the end seemed rushed even though the beginning was good

Ugh ghosting someone is NOT okay
Should have made him suffer more
Seme is a really great catch

lol I wanted Hoshikawa to meet the sisters who like his book. My mans needs therapy!!! Bout to use this as a case study LOL *good*

This story is better when you don't think too much about it

bro,self bombed

Pretty art but annoying character

uhm.. not bad

WAGHHH AGGHHHHH AAAGGHHHH
Leo shouldve been with me instead ;* the black haired guy is pissing me off. Who was his name again, i forgot. I just read this 5 seconds ago. Oh. Hoshikawa.

A good read, a bit slow and frustrating but good.

Very nice and cute !
Supportive boss and friends, nice advice from them, Leo stayed true to himself and didn’t give in to the ex, uke really had commitment issues but with Leo he fixed it, not that much of an age gap (like 7 ig?), pretty art, no sex scenes with uke and one night stand, no assault or rape, Leo trusted uke AND got mad at him as he should !
A great piece :)
4.5/5

This story is dumb I hate it Leo should've gotten mad or something that's so annoying

Even tho the uke is a giant pain in the ass with the whole ghosting, I really like the story