Comments of Hatsukoi No Yamai

not bad

not good

These were too short

The plot twist at the end of every story is definitely worth your time

Wtf did i just read. All of the plots are laughable

You get a sense that they all become couples, but it is really, really vague!!!

This author Kind of hard to get into his story

It's Iike getting one potato chip when you're hungry. Just one.:(

flew right over my head, couldn't get into any oñf the stories.

1) After a car accident Ayase begins to see hallucinations of his first love, Haigo who disappeared, as the young man he was. #Mystery #Charles Bonnet Syndrome #Small Town #Open End
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2) The overly dramatic #train traveler seems to be making fun of Soo, but why does he think they've met before? #Novelist
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3) As a child Tada saved the #Fox Spirit Shiro from being abandoned, and Shiro agreed to stay till Tada was an adult. With only two years left to go, Shiro needs to reconcile his feelings for the human boy. #Open End <->
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4) When Wachi confesses to Meguriya he doesn't receive a reply, but when two people are so aligned musically, are words really necessary? #Piano+Violin #Confession
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5) When Komiya reappears crawls into his bed, after four years, Oosakaya can only wonder how long it will be before the person who says he loves him disappears again...
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6) A #Word Game between two #Colleagues offers one a chance to make his feelings known.

im so sick of oneshots

Very very very shonen ai

chap 1 and 4 are ok. didnt read the rest.

each story could be developed further and deeper, the themes are nice

one shots. art really inconsistent to the point i'm not sure one mangaka did all the stories. first story i didn't really understand- is his first love dead or not? second story about rains was good. third story about the fox spirits was good, but did not feel resolved, is it continued somewhere? had a hard time following what was going on in the fourth story about the pianist and the violinist. fifth story didn't really make sense either- how do you disappear and never get in contact with yr lover? sixth story is alright- poetry competition.

liked the fox story, and the story with the hallucinations. they should get sequels.

1- A guy in a car accident getting delusions and keep seeing his old lover/ open ending-irritating
rest of the stories are fine the wold x boy is good. the oil guy x salaryman is ok too

These stories doesn't have a developing plot to them. They are too short and simple for one shots.