Passing of story is pretty stumbled but I like it despite that seme is hot as well it's just average storyline i actually like it when uke is insecure but dude is running away every time at least seme is communicating type otherwise it would be a disastrous relationship it shouldn't have end like that i wanted to see more.
yk when you’re like i’m not an expert idk if i can critique this well yeah this one is so annoying that even a non expert can tell the pacing is off and that the characters don’t really grow and that the story is flimsy basically just a catalyst for the r18 scenes….
Average « yaoi » story, bottom dude is dumb and a crybaby, the top dude is overprotective (which is not always bad but not in this one) and of course you have to include a sexual assault followed by a sex scene after he got assaulted ?? And it was cringe on top of that whatever ☠☠ im being a hater rn but this wasnt it