It's cute I hope you make more of what you love because Being who you are is impotent. Now my problems with it are it's to short the story line is mest up and it's hard to now with way to read it by but don't fear there's a easy way to fix that. One preparer for a couple all nighters fix the story line so it's not as crocked as it is and number the pages. But over all it's a amazing comic and I look forward to your next one. good luck and far well for now.... good bye and I wish you a happy life... :-)
Un jeune homme qui a quitté son travail pour aller dans un café et son ancien collègue ; le heune urbain arrive dans un lycée rural ; un petit couple dont l'un semble trop confiant et l'autre pas assez ; un jeune homme croit être détesté par son colocataire, un homme froid qui se déprécie à cause d'un léger boitement. (petites histoires sur l'incertitude des sentiments)
Although I enjoyed the stories I have a few questions. In the main story with Kuhara and Fujinami I was wondering what the hold up was. I like them as a couple together and Fujinami was just perfect as he waited for Kuhara, however, what was Kuhara's problem. Why did he leave his job to work at the cafe, he didn't want his previous co-workers to worry about him but why would they be worried, did you slap Fujinami because you didn't think of him that way but it seemed you liked him then so why, did he like him but didn't realize he was gay. Questions questions. Also, I really loved the one shots and wish they were made into longer stories.
two two shots and a couple one shots. the two shots are okay, the one shots are messy. the uke characters are very unsure of themselves and what they want, and their actions and the narratives seem disjointed. ok art.