too fast, each chapter should be split into multiple chapters. even in the first chapter too much happened, could be a volume in itself. I'd prefer if more time was taken over the events. make them feel natural. it's cute so it's a shame.
So far the authors work has many multiple stories and I feel like it’s progressing too fast. If multiple stories are gonna be made then just make a one shot for each of them
fin. Tbh is just ok, some part r funny tho but not smth i would reread. Ml wants to be friends with mc suddenly and yadyadyayda mc fell for ml while ml’s hidden motive is actually to pdkt mc’s sister. In the end ml got rejected, mc confessed, ydydydydyd got tgt allala.