this could have been good but I feel like it’s missing a lot of plot holes at times. The story was also bland most of the times and I didn’t feel myself getting interested in the story despite finish reading it.
im sorry i just cracked up at the end lmaooo at first shiraishi had me confused like i was rlly tryna figyre out whether he rlly liked kurose and then i doubted him and next thing u know he was a NEET i was hit with dhock after shock like wym he a stalker kekek and wym the dad’s gay like the gaping homophobe? SAY SIKE. anyways these bitches crazy ngl these bitches mentallY eel oh ye and the hamster lmaoooa
I was not expecting the plot twist— the one investigating was being investigated. It’s interesting and I like the twist how "make me fall in love" turns into "revenge," which turns into actually falling in love with each other. I had a feeling Shiraishi's father and his father's childhood friend were not only "friends" and I was right! Tho that maybe the reason why his father is an asshole homophobe, but I still hates him. I hope the author included the part where Shiraishi and Kurose expose their relationship to his father while he is lying in a hospital bed taking his last breath, that would be satisfying!
4/5 kinda wonky at times like the character's drives and plot progression, but still good I guess, I like the art style and the dynamic between characters. Uke appears perfect but has stalker tendencies, I don't get why he wanted to get revenge on the seme in the first place, was it because of him saying he would sleep with him if he makes him fall in love? Like that wasn't even said in a bad way, more of a banter sort, plus the seme literally attacked the uke's father in his stead for insulting his son, was that also a reason to take revenge? The seme too is kinda dumb? not really dumb, but close to it, coz even when he suspects the uke is using him, he still wouldn't budge and would opt to be blinded just because it's the uke, it might be romantic, but it's also stupid. Also for a detective story, the unfolding of secrets and revelations were also meh, there was no clicking moment nor a shock factor, just you know, it's part of the plot so you read it.
If i were Ri-chan, i couldn't stay long with the guy who previously rejected me, because i would always doubt his feelings for me and expect them to fall away as soon as unlikable parts if my personality come out. But if Ri-chan is more obsessed with seme than in love, in that case it can pass as refreshing ending
