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THAT DAMN MF OF A BROTHER SHOULD'VE GOTTEN MORE BEATEN UP, HUNG UPSIDE DOWN AND BEATEN UP AGAIN, PUT IN A SACK AND BEATEN UP AGAIN, BECAUSE WHAT THE FUCK DO U MEAN HE JUST GOT AWAY WITH A FEW PUNCHES!? THAT MF JUST LEFT AND.. THAT'S IT?? NO MORE?? HIS DICK SHOULD'VE BEEN CUT, HIS MOUTH SEWED SHUT!!

AND WHAT THE FUCK ICHI?!? GORO DESERVES TO BE HAPPY SO U FUCKING LEFT?? WHAT... WHAT FUCKING LOGIC IS THAT?!?! AND U REALLY DECIDED TO GO TO THAT MF WHO'S FINGERS WERE JUST UP YOUR FUCKING ASS THE DAY BEFORE!?! R U CRAZY?!? THIS— OMYGOD MY BLOOD PRESSURE!!! THEY COULD'VE MADE THIS INTO THREE VOLUMES TO FLESH IT OUT MORE BUT DAMN, THEY JUST RUSHED IT ALL, IT WAS ANNOYING!

IT COULD'VE BEEN GREAT YOU KNOW! IT WAS ALREADY GOOD BUT THEN YOU JUST HAVE TO DO THAT!

Not sure if this "comment" can be seen by everyone, but I already wrote this after finishing the story. Anyways.... This was so ass, what the hell. No yearning, no apologies, no nothing, just fucking and "i-love-you's" that I believe does not deserve to be there just yet. Seriously, what the hell?? After degrading him like that, making bets that involves Jaewon spending the night with another man (and it doesn't matter that you believe in him winning that game you asshole, that was still a shtty bet to be made no matter the reason), and all other shts you weren't even apologetic for! You love him? So what btch? And Jaewon does not have a fucking spine! You have no respect for yourself as well, I am baffled by it. I just gritted my teeth and finished it since I was already far into the story, but I would absolutely never re-read this ass again. I know there are more ass and shtty stories out there and this is probably around mid level, I don't know, but this seriously pissed me off. Nevermind the pacing, the story really isn't it. The characters are so poorly written, but maybe it's just the adaptation, who knows. Maybe the novel (if there is one) is better than the manhwa, but I couldn't care less anymore. Seriously Javier you mf, you have all the money in the world yet you couldn't even do some fact checking, and not only that, the initial conditions for the contract weren't done well. You needed Jaewon to ask for it when you should've done it properly the moment that contact was signed. Not to mention how you no respect for Jaewon as well after supposedly being "in love" with him. Go fuck yourself asshole. Another thing, you say you "love" Jaewon, but you let a man who kept trying to get into your husband/wife/whatever's pants stay with you guys to "take care" of your spouse (yeah this word fits more) like what? You can't get your servants, which I'm sure you have a lot, to take care of him? Cuz I know you can't do it yourself, you're sht so of course you wouldn't be able to do it. No warnings or anything to keep that Count away from the Duchess then you have the audacity to get angry whenever you see them being close or whatever sht. AGH IT'S SO ANNOYING!! I HAVE SO MANY WORDS BUT I AM WAY TOO ANNOYED TO KEEP TYPING!! JUST DON'T READ THIS ASS! THE SMUT ISN'T EVEN GOOD!!