Comments of Nureru Karada (YAMAKAMI Riyu)

It's sad that the tutor took advantage of an innocent retarded Hinata, kept brainwashing to manipulate him. There should not be the threesome part. It may fulfill the author or some readers desire but it ruins the story to make Hinata choose soulmate/lover by completing sex skill, shallow typical 3P+ plot. I also dislike the aimless ending.

This story is about rape , sexual coercion, and abuse of people with mental disorders. The main character has multiple problems (highly susceptible to suggestion, false and missing memories, and indecisiveness) which both semes extort to their benefit.
Neither semes express concern about the main characters feelings or see him as a human being. Instead, they view him as an object which they "train", "teach", and "claim" as there own.
The ending is left open with the main character going to conceling in order to identify his true feelings from the lies. He has to figure out who he really loves or not.
On a personal note, I hope he does not pick either of them. He should keep his distance from both. Instead, he should try to form a healthy relationship with someone that respects and cares for him. Not someone who uses violence and coercion to get things.

oi . oi .oil !! wtfvck was that?? completed? GAH! are you kidding me? c'mon please UPDATE or make a sequel for this one..I just love this one seriously ..kya!~

OH MAN ! @_@ That was a fuck up ! :|

I feel sad that the uke lived like that :I

love triangle and Twincest. Not my thing although I really feel sorry for Hinata.

Wtf. I don't know how some people can give 5 stars..

Weird messed up shit

The story's fucked up, but at least it has a vague ending so that I can live in hope that the poor kid tells them both to go fuck themselves and lives on to have a happy life with someone who actually fucking cares about his feelings

Lol hinata is fucked up.
Hahaha but the 3P was cool

Hello, I'd like to report a crime?

Nice but the ending....confusion

I hate the open ending, but I guess people can imagine their own preference with it. I hate the idea of him going back to Suda. At least his brother was okay if Hinata didn't choose him. Suda just showed how petty and childish he is.

1 // unfinished?!

Useless and almost retarded uke...

PLS THIS IS CLEARLY STILL MARKED AS INCOMPLETE

Suda should go to jail. What he did was grooming. He should burn and rot in hell.