Comments of On the Veranda

A man realizes that his verdana is a weird spiritual mirror of his coworker's apartment, letting him unintentionally spy into the life of a near perfect stranger. Half a ghost story, half an accidental-stalker story, Ichikawa ends on an ambiguous note with the promise of relationship enticingly unfulfilled. But that's part of Ichikawa's charm -- to give us just enough details to make the story real, but too many to make it trite.

a beautifully well written one-shot that left you writhing for more buut my word beautiful!! :) x

Nice short story with some supernatural/paranormal aspects. Had one jerking off scene but absolutely no smut with an ending that left you happy but wanting to know about their future. Definitely not a Shounen Ai read but not a smut story either.

knowing someone in a unexplanable way.
well who knows how does things occurred
but one thing for sure, that's the mystery of love .. lol

wow nice reading

So strange but interesting. I have never encountered a plot like this before UNLESS the astral projection was actually done by the person who is either in a coma or dead, but the person is very much ALIVE. So strange but promising.

A sweet story about a guy who moved into a house where he can see the "spirit" of his coworker(?) on the veranda.

super super short :(

where is the next chapter? no srsly, like...it can't be over....what

I'm so curious.... Hmm..hmm.

Guy moves to a new apartment and finds a ghost on a veranda but that ghost is actually the image of a person that works close to the guy

Man has a ghost on his balcony who seems to embody the regrets of a guy he's seen around. But as they get closer the ghost disappears. Very cool.

This was a nice short story. I liked the premise and I think the length suited the content. I enjoy insular plots like this, allowing the reader to draw a conclusion for themselves.

another oneshot that feels complete in a sense... though I'd love a whole series based on their beginnings in this chapter. loved it a lot. especially the crying scene <3

A strange event when a new resident moves in! What kind of person is that transparent guy? He appears sometimes on the new resident's veranda. Doesn't he seem like a ghost?

wait was the guy on the veranda real?

this was really interesting! for such a short story, i already got so intrigued like wow? would have liked if there was more but just this is actually good enough too bc it won't really leave you hanging however, it'll leave your interest piqued

I want to know moreeee