Comments of Seinen Hakkaten

LAST READ ch 5.5
This was so precious ToT

Cute but the 3-4 chapters were jarring. Should have been organized chronologically. Well, the translation / scan was proper but the story itself shouldn't have gone forward then went back I was so confused

I liked the start and I enjoyed the ending, but the middle part was messy and hard to follow

It’s whatever

Uke writes erotic fiction for his uncles magazine (which is weird... it's weird to have your nephew who is a minor write erotica for your magazine right??) And then he somehow gets involved with the cool seme and they start jacking off together

It was a bit of a mess at the end bc the story decided to jump like half a year to a year ahead when drama had happened and then had to go back and explain why. Like just... play all that out chronologically? It was pretty good?

Anyway

5/10

I love this it reminds of those old mangas from early 2000s

pretty hunk x ugly twink is my favorite fucking thing i love this shit so much i love it

im distracted when i read it. will reread it

i almost died from the translation in the beginning but it improved

27Jun23
Seinen Hakkaten
Aoi Tori yori (sequel)
Yakedo to Tsumeato (spin-off)

First book
Oh I love them so much ! I’m grinning like an idiot because they’re too cute !
They’re so fluffy and their relationship is so healthy, I see them going far.
The uncle’s friend is an asshole tho. He’s a cheater right ? Please I don’t want him to be with the uncle or the uncle in love with him. The uncle is such a nice guy, he doesn’t deserve that trash man..

they r so cute its adorable

Cute
Yes yes u do ^^ cuz if u just fall for appearance u don't fall for the person lol

interesting! vintage. not like 90svintage more early 2000s vintage. side characters annoyed me half to death but the main couple was cute.

It was good, nothing life changing but a cute story all the same 7/10

it was meh its kinda hard to read with an computer since mom took my phone again but stilll meh