Comments of Shinju Bl

I think the point of thos compilation is to die together or something?
It is fun but the reason I give it less star is because in the last chap i think the reason why he can't die with the one he actually love isn't clear enough
1 : the uke kill the seme father who abuse the seme and the seme kill himself to follow the uke
2 : the mc want to khm because his bf cheat on him with some girl, in the forest some stranger came to ask him to do a double suicide (as in the uke kill him and the khm later) but before that they have sex first like ??? That's kinda out of nowhere. But after killing him he found out he don'f have courage to khm so he found another person and the circle are repeated
3 : the uke family commit double suicide so he ended up being obsessed about it and ask his lover to do it together with him, except this seme he kept having sex with
The last chap is volume 1 chap 3
An: idk people be hating on 1st chap but i actually like it? And instead found flaw on the 2nd and 3rd, they all great tho

i read this right after waking up n i was hiding from flies taht were swarming around me
Anyways
these were the worst oneshots i’ve read in my life, it was so shallow that i did not care about it n forvot it in 5 minutes after i was done like that’s how irrelevant n stupid this was
TERRIBLEEEEE DONT READ. >_<

So.. each story is bout suicide

Why is this the 2nd bl death anthology I’ve read today?!

WHAT.THE.FUCK

the first chapter was so sad

I don’t like all the stories like only the last two because those are the only two I read out of curiosity bring treating but only if they had more I’m actually the most intriguing in the one that I like the most I think that shouldn’t be a one shot but should be like a full on seven chapter thing even if it ends in death or it ends in happiness and him finally help the third story really good could do with so much more it does feel a little weird it feels like if I had more I could feel for the characters I can see it the second story was nice as a one shot it’s intriguing it’s not actually meant to be kind of sad it’s just meant to be like lamenting thought it is kind of sad that you know that that actually does happen in real life at that point if I get you thinking Then you actually understand the sadness behind it but I do like the third one I wish there was a full on couple chapters of that even if it’s just for like three but by itself could do with great development it’s really good

bro the third story need more chapters:((((

If a 12 year old wrote a manga it would be something similar to this

Ohhhh i like it

Not recommend

What the heck

What just happened they both died