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So I personally read to like chapter 20 stopped went to a random chapter like way later on realize that what I wanted wasn’t kinda gonna happen and that’s why I usually don’t like this type of stories and then decided to read the ending and say goodbye so this is clearly was not for me for multiple reasons specifically because who I wanted, wasn’t clearly at the end the en route, but also because it was the story is very warm and other art it’s good but it’s very lukewarm
Im just curious but who were you expecting to be endgame?
From interactions that they had when they were kids because they were still kids while I was reading it the black haired, golden eyes kid, the Duke technically it genuinely made the more sense more than Josh. They just didn’t seem to have that much in common. I don’t know later on in the story, but I am not interested.
I just personally don’t think I’m interested in people teasing their partner to that extent or bullying. The shit out of them just never been my thing even when you meet them for the first time like I get a little bit of teasing there in here but having like appropriate conversations and I have like it’s OK who her sister ended up with but not completely I also thought the actual dupe would’ve been better for her. They had a lot more in common as well and he was the second male lead originally and now I felt like damn you made him the second male lead again like that’s just sad. But I didn’t hate who the sister ended up with. I just really dislike to the FL ended ended up with.
I have a lot of points to the story like a lot of thoughts, but the main one is this could’ve been really really good not saying that this isn’t good, but this is a really good concept because this is mad short there is quite a bit of lengthening that this could’ve done with the story I also have a very big issue with the art specifically because it’s so Chibi styled it makes the bottom looks very young, but it also feels kind of inconsistent when it comes to the art. I think it could be a lot better to perk everything better like this could’ve had a good 20 like chapters. like if the other wanted to keep it fast, but not that fast they could’ve done 25 a very good solid story. It would’ve been very nice because there’s very little when it comes to your tentacle. That is actually good. This one was nice. This could’ve been even better. This could’ve had genuine potential it does.