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From all the comments that I’ve read certain things that I’ve thought of I skipped a bunch of chapters and still knew what was happening. FYI, like I rounded up to the conclusion of the situation and a couple of spoilers and then I was like oh yeah that makes complete in other sons because it’s like four in the morning and I’m tired and I just couldn’t come up with them myself.
But I’ve come to the conclusion of two things one I wasted my night because I’m awake this late too my day off I wasted my day off kind of mad about that and then for anybody who wants to know, I’m kinda happy that I read the spoilers because
For what I can read, she ends up with the holy being bird, which sucks it immediately turned me off to the whole story. I don’t give a give a fuck about the tiny bit of interest that I still had to. The mother is actually a bitch she doesn’t truly care. She just acts like she does even if she did. She mostly wants power because even from the prophecy itself, all she wanted was power. She’s just as bad in her other tiny psychotic daughter, who by the way it would not have turned out like this to this extent. Yeah she would’ve been a little bitchy. Yeah she would’ve had some behavioral issues that all could’ve been mitigated with proper adult supervision and guidance. I kind of get why the father left in the freaking first timeline. I’m 100% love even in this one he wants to leave, but the only reason he is because of his daughter. The mother is selfish as fuck, which makes her a horrible person. She’s one of the type of people that should’ve never been a mother and all around the story just like fell off super hard. It had a circle almost a good premise, even though I saw the holes like the Mom’s attitude then finding out that she’s like this made a lot of sense and it still came with some interest even though I read the spoiler didn’t matter and then the other one happened and I’m like yeah I don’t wanna stick around for that and I lost all interest by like chapter 28. I was still supposed to be 29 so I just rounded all the way up to the last chapter available and I’m like yeah I still know what’s going on. I don’t care.
I have some grievances with these past two chapters for one I can understand not putting that much blame onto the soon to be Duke because once certain things happen he was a child, but I can’t put more blame on their family for doing zero research zero reconnaissance
Leaving that fact behind, I really disliked the speech pattern the way it was formatted. I just did not like the writing. I also found the MC looked weird. She looks like a child. She look like she got a 5 head and a tiny ass chin. It was it was strange.
Besides that my biggest issue is just the writing I found that the author just didn’t make or take across the actual necessity for her breaking her engagement or his actual wrongs not just because it makes me worse. I don’t know if the author did that because they’re gonna end up together, but even so that part in necessity of why at that time should not have changed like first of all you should’ve brought up the fact it was partly because of his actions during his dance with another lady it was because in high society
clearly it would make her look lesser than and she’s already like that in her family it would be humiliating and it was wrong with them to use this strategy there could’ve been others and then there’s the fact that he saw her over obsession in her distress and decided never to log into it. A normal person doesn’t just randomly start, acting obsessive out of nowhere. She was a little bit before then, but she was clearly a lot nicer and softer, and then randomly she started acting kind of crazy, and you decided not to look into why or look into her at all he says he liked her or even cared, but that’s a lie. The whole thing feels quite fake from his perspective so I would not want to be with somebody if they thought of me like that like I was just as pretty or convenient so all you made me feel nice so my demeanor being soft determines how much you like me and that is an issue because that means you don’t actually like me