So I personally read to like chapter 20 stopped went to a random chapter like way later on realize that what I wanted wasn’t kinda gonna happen and that’s why I usually don’t like this type of stories and then decided to read the ending and say goodbye so this is clearly was not for me for multiple reasons specifically because who I wanted, wasn’t clearly at the end the en route, but also because it was the story is very warm and other art it’s good but it’s very lukewarm
Im just curious but who were you expecting to be endgame?
From interactions that they had when they were kids because they were still kids while I was reading it the black haired, golden eyes kid, the Duke technically it genuinely made the more sense more than Josh. They just didn’t seem to have that much in common. I don’t know later on in the story, but I am not interested.
I just personally don’t think I’m interested in people teasing their partner to that extent or bullying. The shit out of them just never been my thing even when you meet them for the first time like I get a little bit of teasing there in here but having like appropriate conversations and I have like it’s OK who her sister ended up with but not completely I also thought the actual dupe would’ve been better for her. They had a lot more in common as well and he was the second male lead originally and now I felt like damn you made him the second male lead again like that’s just sad. But I didn’t hate who the sister ended up with. I just really dislike to the FL ended ended up with.
This was beautiful. This is great. I am losing my ever loving mine for what could happen next and how. It’s gonna be laid out because I know I know I’m sadly somebody a little too perceptive so I can’t read certain things or watch certain things because I get bored but this is so good because it has so many ways this could play out and it is so pretty. Oh my God.
But does anybody get me like this is a great spot to stop though because it was starting to get like overwhelmed but at the same time it’s not it is but it’s not like because I could just stop for very long time and come back because that’s usually what I do but like good and bad
Why do I feel like this is rushed as shit right now like that ending with telling them it felt like something went wrong in the publishers part like not a few or whatever I don’t know what happened, but this feels like it had a little bit more to go like you know at least you can go to therapy like acknowledgment of that happening then maybe a little bit more training for his performance his performance we didn’t have to see anything more like what the fuck I wanted to see people’s reactions. I’m very angry right now. I love this. I love it so much. Why would you do this to me? (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
I don’t know how you feel because it’s not like I dislike this. I really like it because it didn’t feel like a miscommunication. It felt more like a lack of communication because the relationship started of it technically being an arranged marriage so if it’s viewed that way, I can get it. I will say, though I still don’t like the you know climax at chapter number four because the authors love to do that, but I also do get it because it would actually work than make sense with the plot of the story so it wasn’t bad. This could’ve been longer and could’ve been better could’ve had a little bit more to it, but I’m not exactly mad about this
OK, I read everything.so I have only one thing I don’t know, actually I do know how anybody could’ve liked the persecutor at any point they probably just felt pity and didn’t see the very clear signs but from somebody that has read enough and seen this pattern very often his powder play domination and manipulation. Classic trait of a narcissist in a relationship you can clearly that wasn’t gonna work for many reason.
the power imbalance there was horrible like it was never gonna work not just because he clearly didn’t like him and the other guy clearly could see it and didn’t give a shit he’s extremely selfish. I don’t completely hate him because I genuinely feel pity for this character, but he needs therapy even if his parents potentially are in love. They were clearly not good parents. He needs therapy. He needs to work on himself and I do genuinely hope that he find somebody that’s up to his level to put him in his place. I believe he needs somebody who is snarky who can make him gravel and kinda lose his shit a little bit, but he genuinely needs to do the work on himself
Because I hope nobody forgets that he did core him into sleeping with him the first time and basically every single time I don’t care that the warning is not there he course them every single time that they slept together, he took his decision of power and made a forcefully submit to his situation. Mind that his hormones were probably also out of the freaking whack because of what was happening and he just made it worse. He genuinely acted on the bus going to jail like a rape victim. Everything he said was horribly traumatizing. Single other instance felt like he was reliving trauma. He was shaking because he did not want him to touch him. He clearly dislikes him because he’s an abuser.
To be realistic, I’m only a chapter 7 and I feel so discomforted I know for a fact that stuff like this isn’t exactly my style, but there’s baby and I know that and I wanna see that and I personally am OK with the two main characters that I know for a fact, they’re gonna end up together with relationship. It’s actually good. I enjoy it, but the circumstance isn’t in the poor main character literally chapters 7 and he’s clearly going through a whole ass meltdown like he feels so lonely and you can straight up just
see it. It’s so sad.
I personally just just pass over the fact that there is R and it is happening but I will say that this was actually well we’re in a lot of stories that do have that in them are usually well written which pisses me off I got to like the third chapter and it happened and I was like I don’t wanna I don’t wanna do this and then I skimmed a little more and then I realized I could like this I could end up liking this if I tried my best to just turn off my brain a little bit in certain parts, but I will have to wait until this is complete like there’s no way that I could read this right now like it has to be complete or it will piss me off like story wise. This looks very deep. I skimmed like a couple chapters randomly. It seems complex. The characters actually look very well built. It’s just that smut factor makes certain things. Go kind of bunker. It always does when it’s done to aggressively.
I’m kind of pissed about this chapter a little bit because everybody knows why but I do like how it’s not miscommunication you’re just assuming something it’s more of the you need to communicate more instead, which I’m actually quite happy about it because that’s usually what actually happen
There is one more concern that I had. I really like this read I read one comment that really put everything into perspective to me.
But one of them is the age gap with Aiko
Even in the pictures clearly looked way older like way older. I’m pretty sure she was like overtime almost 20 years older. She also the first time they met. He was still in high school. That was it grossed me out a little bit. She’s clearly an older woman. She clearly had a husband already. I was waiting for this to go into the they never really got together that isn’t really his biological son type of situation, but it didn’t but yeah, it was a little odd. The age is clearly really big. I’m pretty sure she’s just happy with her deceased husband now that they’re both technically deceased so this felt like a really odd read because it falls under like a weird gap in my brain of how people are supposed to interact and then how I want things to go when I interact
I have a lot of points to the story like a lot of thoughts, but the main one is this could’ve been really really good not saying that this isn’t good, but this is a really good concept because this is mad short there is quite a bit of lengthening that this could’ve done with the story I also have a very big issue with the art specifically because it’s so Chibi styled it makes the bottom looks very young, but it also feels kind of inconsistent when it comes to the art. I think it could be a lot better to perk everything better like this could’ve had a good 20 like chapters. like if the other wanted to keep it fast, but not that fast they could’ve done 25 a very good solid story. It would’ve been very nice because there’s very little when it comes to your tentacle. That is actually good. This one was nice. This could’ve been even better. This could’ve had genuine potential it does.