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I have some grievances with these past two chapters for one I can understand not putting that much blame onto the soon to be Duke because once certain things happen he was a child, but I can’t put more blame on their family for doing zero research zero reconnaissance
Leaving that fact behind, I really disliked the speech pattern the way it was formatted. I just did not like the writing. I also found the MC looked weird. She looks like a child. She look like she got a 5 head and a tiny ass chin. It was it was strange.

Besides that my biggest issue is just the writing I found that the author just didn’t make or take across the actual necessity for her breaking her engagement or his actual wrongs not just because it makes me worse. I don’t know if the author did that because they’re gonna end up together, but even so that part in necessity of why at that time should not have changed like first of all you should’ve brought up the fact it was partly because of his actions during his dance with another lady it was because in high society

clearly it would make her look lesser than and she’s already like that in her family it would be humiliating and it was wrong with them to use this strategy there could’ve been others and then there’s the fact that he saw her over obsession in her distress and decided never to log into it. A normal person doesn’t just randomly start, acting obsessive out of nowhere. She was a little bit before then, but she was clearly a lot nicer and softer, and then randomly she started acting kind of crazy, and you decided not to look into why or look into her at all he says he liked her or even cared, but that’s a lie. The whole thing feels quite fake from his perspective so I would not want to be with somebody if they thought of me like that like I was just as pretty or convenient so all you made me feel nice so my demeanor being soft determines how much you like me and that is an issue because that means you don’t actually like me

From all the comments that I’ve read certain things that I’ve thought of I skipped a bunch of chapters and still knew what was happening. FYI, like I rounded up to the conclusion of the situation and a couple of spoilers and then I was like oh yeah that makes complete in other sons because it’s like four in the morning and I’m tired and I just couldn’t come up with them myself.

But I’ve come to the conclusion of two things one I wasted my night because I’m awake this late too my day off I wasted my day off kind of mad about that and then for anybody who wants to know, I’m kinda happy that I read the spoilers because





For what I can read, she ends up with the holy being bird, which sucks it immediately turned me off to the whole story. I don’t give a give a fuck about the tiny bit of interest that I still had to. The mother is actually a bitch she doesn’t truly care. She just acts like she does even if she did. She mostly wants power because even from the prophecy itself, all she wanted was power. She’s just as bad in her other tiny psychotic daughter, who by the way it would not have turned out like this to this extent. Yeah she would’ve been a little bitchy. Yeah she would’ve had some behavioral issues that all could’ve been mitigated with proper adult supervision and guidance. I kind of get why the father left in the freaking first timeline. I’m 100% love even in this one he wants to leave, but the only reason he is because of his daughter. The mother is selfish as fuck, which makes her a horrible person. She’s one of the type of people that should’ve never been a mother and all around the story just like fell off super hard. It had a circle almost a good premise, even though I saw the holes like the Mom’s attitude then finding out that she’s like this made a lot of sense and it still came with some interest even though I read the spoiler didn’t matter and then the other one happened and I’m like yeah I don’t wanna stick around for that and I lost all interest by like chapter 28. I was still supposed to be 29 so I just rounded all the way up to the last chapter available and I’m like yeah I still know what’s going on. I don’t care.

From how long this was taking to update I knew it had to be because there was an anime coming out of this and I knew it. It was a fact it is that good so I knew that it was gonna happen but they did it too early. I wish they had waited for it to have enough chapters like end of season chapters so maybe till chapter 40 or 15 because it’s still in the goddamn 20 it’s crazy there’s no need for them to have made an anime now I know there’s a novel but still. It’s been like Bajillion years.

I left the long ass comment, trying to explain myself, and I know exactly how I feel about the story which is super short
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I might sound mean but the story feels half ass like it was took in halfway there and then stopped. It’s not good like it’s almost there to be good so I can see how a lot of people find this to be really good because it’s not bad but it’s just not there.

Yeah, I really just think this isn’t my style or something. It was so interesting. The plot bases of dancing with the mask I also think it’s partly the translation that just pisses me off it’s not bad or anything. It’s just certain things. I just don’t feel like correlate properly.

But I just can’t deal with it. Some people just piss me off way too fuck ass much. I didn’t like the development or how it flows specifically I thought that it was very abrupt going from him being a kid and just getting the first mask right to randomly already knowing how to dance knowing everything having a bunch of masks it was quite abrupt. I found that part to be quite boring, and then him being forced to buy this dude that is I don’t know cursed or being possessed. It’s kind of shit. I did not like that plot point I thought it was awful absolutely so almost irrelevant. Everybody pissed me off him being forced to be part of this whatever the fuck thing about killing tigers and out of almost any monster or whatever that they had to pick they picked basic ass tigers. I kinda get it, but at the same time it feels like the same phobia you would get from a freaking shark it’s weird. They should’ve just done Yokai like normal because I feel like the story would’ve been a little bit more diverse that way, but it’s always just basic ass tigers same ass tigers the whole fucking time and I’m over here like but you still have certain supernatural shit and even talk about them in mask form and I’m over here like they’re clearly a thing so this is boring as fuck because it could’ve been done better.

I didn’t realize that this was Haram. I also don’t like that plot point. I think it becomes an issue with the plot of the story. I think he gets in the way of structure and the characters development and how he shows it. I think it just becomes kind of flawed, but besides that I’m talking about like what’s happening right now instead I don’t like the girl I don’t like the maid very well her behavior and like character build technically felt all over the place. It was weird bro like when she was at the carriage near at the end, she felt OK but then her actions didn’t make sense that the start in comparison how she acted in her past memories it doesn’t it doesn’t it doesn’t match it’s just weird.

My goal was to wait like half a year I did not succeed I came back and now I’m like what the fuck because I’m sad. I need more because I’m so curious. This is actually quite interesting. Even if you take out the sex component, this is very interesting.

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Saddest thing is if any of them die he’ll immediately know our MC will immediately know because he will get their strength like he will know that they are gone that would be completely destructive like self-destructed. You feel yourself getting this extreme strength and all you can feel is this extremely horrid dread People you love are dead.

I thought that this would be good, but I actually found a kind of boring

OK, so I was the tiniest bit disappointed
Actually, just disappointed I would say I hate when male leads say those specific words I no longer want to be or need anything type of thing that he said because I’m like in real life, it makes it very serious. It’s not flattery words is a fantasy so they’re fucking true and more like a romance.

and as a character, it makes them seem as less than at one point, almost like a puppet and they stop acting like a whole being. that they were made to be when this happens, and just act like a plot device. like an accessory and I detest that,

not a valid character no desire for anything no goals just oh I love you and that’s it. I am nothing else anymore. I just hope that the story doesn’t do that because when you want love for somebody, you don’t wanna stop them from being a person otherwise this is really really good like you had tiny tiny mistakes or inconsistencies that didn’t really freaking matter. I hope this character doesn’t end up like that like a puppet. I do not like plot characters that are just there for plot and don’t actually have a character.

Other enough for the queen, I feel almost genuinely bad for her because of what her family did to her she wouldn’t have ended up like this. She is quite sneaky and a little shitty, but I don’t think she was this evil before maybe twisted because her family clearly is of her brother and her ended up so fucked up in the head but still she should get her revenge by stabbing her brother because she’s already fucked might as well take him out because he does sound like a son of a bitch

The story feels like mildly well developed. I can only see very very slim plot holes that should’ve been addressed like where are they getting all the other vegetables and all the other seasonings and stuff is it like a wagon with trade? How are they paying for that? How is everything happening like I would’ve want more information in that regard but otherwise I really really like this. It does feel like the same old same old like a better spark to it. I will say like it’s just better made. I will say, though I wish they would have turned down certain things when it comes to like. I’ll just call me my name. I’m just like everybody else and all that shit. It’s kind of weird. I never liked that if anything I don’t like that trope as much to an extent, it would’ve been fine, but to another, you have to understand who you are and be willing to accept it.

Wish I could like this, but I’m just not into exhibitionism

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Like genuinely I tried so hard to read this. This was OK at the start. I could see it getting iffy and the amount of horrid plot holes like very obvious, bad writing and bad world build is insane. At first, it was pretty OK like you could see it and then it just kept getting worse and worse and worse. I made it so far so I really wanted to complete this but the minute that the king collapse that was my last fucking strong because why is the dude that technically supposed to be responsible for the kitchen not being blamed at all for this happening under his nose and being severely punished.


The first issue that literally almost broke the camels back is the king said that he had already gone to war with the priesthood whatever so why just why didn’t they take over then what could’ve happened? Nothing was explained to us why they couldn’t take over then that is a massive chunk of story that they could’ve added to explain everything better and get the story into a better track instead of just like the big bad, but nothing needs to be explained because it’s clear that their goal even from them was to take over for what reason I don’t know probably demons. It’s always that.


The second one is clearly the fucking castle is his territory and he refuses to investigate when absolutely everybody is getting hurt there as I said before not blaming the literal head chef which is his responsibility for absolutely everybody else in the kitchen because that’s usually how it works there’s always a hierarchy technically she already found evidence, but it was only of one person, but she found evidence of absolutely everybody else, but they are still there a cook, no matter how much they wanna put it in or whatever the fuck that they hold so much power they are apparently supposed to be structurally even stronger than the Kings will to tell you to fucking leave and get executed, apparently like why is the tournament still going on? Why is he even still there? Why aren’t you continuously to investigate and how the hell did they even get the drugs in there in the first place the fact that the royal family is not working is a royal family it feels like a huge plot hole that was never fucking developed because the author decided not to actually do any work when it comes to making it hard for their character and follow an actual plot that works .

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This ending felt mega abrupt like a mega abrupt. The start was great, but it kept suddenly but like going down a freaking hill type of bad like there was so much plot that this could’ve been milked for and it could’ve been 300 times better I’ve seen that this author really does this often the story goes really good. The story of the start is extremely interesting and it randomly just takes a short turn into a wall and says OK we’re stopping here and it just isn’t good. I quite dislike this being the ending regardless of how many side stories it might have unless it’s like another 20 side stories that continue the story I’m not gonna like this I also feel like the translations are good enough for them being free translations they’re good, but I feel like even with the appropriate translation. This would still freaking suck. There could’ve been so much more.