Comments of Shoushin no Monako

Bruh.Most of the harleyquin work are about fl who has to be pitiful and forgiving a bastard ml easily.

this was so damn dumb omfg the fl really irked my nerves more than the ml

Hated ML, instead of believing FL that she’s pregnant with his baby, he kicked her out and broke up with her and haven’t seen her for two years bc he was busy fucking other woman and his mistress!! He could done a dna test to know if it’s really his child with FL but instead he pity himself and hurt FL!!! FL should have let ML suffer more and make him begged for forgiveness!!!

Boy those translations were atrocious. And can you believe the person who translated it actually had the cajones to put it up for sale on amazon and google play store... When you can get the officially translated version for cheaper and with proper translations. It is always awesome when people spend time translating these, when they properly edit and proofread their translations of course. It was obvious in many spots they didn't know the proper translations and they just put something there. Like the spot that said he rescued her parents from debt and she was grateful. That is impossible since she doesn't have any parents. People that don't catch onto that detail will surely be confused. Anyway. It isn't worth purchasing this version and I am glad I didn't. Reading it here told me I did the right thing.

The mangaka failed to portray the angst and feelings that were in the novel!!! So disappointed. It was like they both have flat affect especially with those blank eyes. She was abandoned and he didn’t believe her yet she didn’t cry or her eyes was same all throughout? She was confronted by the ex-gf yet somehow I didn’t feel anything with the art drawn by mangaka. Even when the ML was reasoning out why he didn’t believe her, yet with their facial expressions I just don’t feel sympathetic at all. Is it just me or what?

To add, she just accepted him easily just like that in the end. I know she would eventually because she loves him but heck HE SHOULD PROVE HIMSELF FIRST. There was no remorse in his face and he didn’t apologize upon knowing in Amy was his daughter. Instead he asserted that they get married just like that. I mean, who does that?!! Doesn’t he feel apologetic at all for throwing her away and making her suffer all alone with their child? I understand his point that he got vasectomy but still he wouldn’t deny that he left her before even making sure it was his child. He could’ve done DNA testing via amniocentesis or wait for her to deliver to get a DNA test. He is stupid for someone as successful as he is. And MC is more stupid for letting him get away with his faults just like that. (╬￣皿￣)凸

Only one redeeming factor is that love and forgiveness goes hand in hand but the process of getting into it was so rushed.

If I could rate this as zero, I would.

She's stupid and he's an asshole.

She was his pregnant mistress...

Two years ago, Freya Addison fell for sexy billionaire Zac Deverell. He gave her everything money could buy, and more pleasure in the bedroom than she'd thought possible. But when Freya announced she was pregnant, Zac threw her out.

Now she'll become his wife!

When they meet again, the passion between them is as strong as ever. Zac whisks Freya away to Monaco and back to his bed, where he'll get his answers! If the baby is his, he'll make Freya his wife....

Nice story. Maybe read original harlequin book will be better to understand the plot

In terms of story we hear of this kind of narrative all the time, a woman claiming that her child is another person child but what is strange is that 2 years after they parted away, the baby girl is being accepted straight away by the man who didn't believe that this was his daughter, the man who believed that his girlfriend of 2 years had cheated on him!

However after that initial and sudden acceptance , the story went Disney's way, So it was Happily Ever after!!

Sweat story - quick read.