Comments of Sleeping In My Book

12/10
[ch.51]

THE LAST UPLOAD WAS LAST YEAR!?!?!? PLEASE, I NEED TO KNOWW!! CURRENTLY 2:05AM AND IM SOBBING WTF

Gorgeous art and really cool new concept. But shit I didn't realize the last update was February lmao rip

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH I WAS CONSUMED!!!
Why is this sooo underrated?!?? I only got to know this now?!?? I LOVE IT!!!
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evil spirit x ill author

no idea what's happening and what the plot about or going
last read chapter 19

Oh my gosh, this is a masterpiece. Oh my goodness. Oh my gosh...I can't explain it's greatness, you just hotta read this. The reason why it's so amazing to me is because I can relate a lot to what's going on with his head....I've been in the pre state of hallucinations and my biggest fear and trigger was actually starting to hallucinate. How he interacted with his characters, and his hallucinations and imaginations, by building up worlds and realities, you can cope but if you can't pull out then you'll end up like Xu Su, and yeah you have to abandon or kill your characters at some point if you wanna stop or limit it. It feels so bad to leave your worlds and characters but it's the only way to keep yourself sane. The words spoken here as well as in the novels that he wrote, it's so true and beautiful. The author, you're amazing. I really loved Yue yue's last words and the scene of her teardrop, also when the 2 ghosts saw Ye and Xu Su's souls. Zhong Ye also had his soul pierced by Xu Su's pen, that was such a significant scene, how amazing. Also he finally broke his curse! Woah I can't wait to see what happens now. I wonder what Xu Su's honna do now. I really REALLY love this. It's an incredible piece. A work of a lifetime it's beautiful

omg... I love this

I'm like on ch 35 and I have no idea what's happening lmao

I don't know if this will ever update....

Ch 51
Its soooooo beautiful

The start of the story was interesting and the setting is pretty hot, but...
Main leads are too unrealistic. Xu Su, who was all enclosed, frigid and drown in his suffering, got half of his "soul" eaten by demon, but still behaves himself like a normal guy. Actually he seems to get much better, fell in love and became so proactive and bold - suchwise the loss of half of his soul in this webtoon looks totally a cure and nice deed, but the author still tries unconvincingly play out the drama of split (or lost?) personality ...so i feel that whole thing is kinda fake.
The demon also has unnatural and confusing behavior. Ok, i can imagine him feeling attached to Xu Su after he freed him from fiction world, but his flirting with Xu Su without being aware of it and defenseless in front of him is out of character. It looks like he degrade from calculated insensitive supernational being to an innocent child or a romantic lotus. Makes no sense.

There is still something a bit spellbinding in this story, some kind of fairy tale vibes, but it would be so much better if the characters had full flesh personalities and their relationship had described development instead of sudden changes.

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