Comments of The Hunter's one night

That was some nice art but plot twist was just..

Wish it was longer AND NO FORCING THEY COULD HAVE MADE THIS SO CUTE YET THEY DECIDED TO ADD THAT SH IT

Wow...really cool..

uhmmmm good art but like.... uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

That's the end!???

IT ENDED J7ST LIKE THAT??? NO CLOSURE??? NOT EVEN A SWEET FLUFFLY SNIPPET OF THEIR LIFE TOGETHER TFF SHOULD'VE BEEN SO LONGER UGHH

Ais that it? hoping for side stories if that was the end huhu, i need more of themm

Really enjoyed the story but it’s hard to explain. By chapter 11 or 12 it goes haywire and then it’s just non stop smut between the two male leads. There was a really good build up and I would have loved more story or at least give it a proper conclusion

I wish there was more because this had ALOT of potential

No side stories

I will wait for the next chapter

idk if the author's dead :( good job and rest in peace. the author's twt account is @dugokick. they have a really nice art style :(((

30 March 2024

his poor back

Motherfucker what kind of ending was that >:((
But it was good enough, this could've been longer and stretched out into an actually good story (not to say it isn't currently) the ending just feels too abrupt like they just stopped the story in the middle of them fucking.
My sweet brother in all things unholy you could've given us one panel of them outside the dungeon happy ( ･_･)


Side notes:
- Holy fuck they have *snatched* waists
- Why you fuck in dungeon? Go home and do the papapa on a comfy bed (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

the rushed ending hurts me…also the rape was not needed? plus I feel like even tho it was added should’ve explored more into their relationship after that