Comments of Toritome no Nai Koi no Shi

unexpectedly good

already read as a one shot in another story

l'idée est très mignonne

The guy with a hole in his heart

this plays out like a fanfic writing scenario which is the highest compliment in my book... thank you... thank you

Poet indeed. Playful. Wonderful one-shot.

ok as a "kind of" writer, this is just So good??? like the use of all those metaphors make this really interesting in the sense where what the glasses guy is feeling seems so poetic... yeah, idrk if y'all can understand what i'm saying lol but this really feels like a beautiful poem :)

yoooooooo that’s cute as hell ㅠㅠ

Miyashita wakes up with a painful hole in his chest, after finding out that his best friend Yasuo is married. He realizes its because hes in love with Yasuo (who, thankfully, was just lying about having a wife to see Miyashita's reaction)

My gawsh that was so cute TvT

sweet and delicate

fluff huhu want more

Really want to read it

A really lovely one shot that focused on the feelings that confuse and overwhelm as this couple move from lifelong friends to falling in love.

Adults who are childhood friends. One has a hole in his chest and is bothered when his friend tells him he's married. Later turns out to be a lie. Cute interplay between the two, and the story feels complete. No smut.