Comments of Ugly Duckling

Boy author takes over completing the story his grandfather started. The story is about a girl with low self-esteem who is frequently bullied. At first the uncaring boy author wants to end her story quickly but as the story progresses he finds the story won't let him and he becomes more involved in the story asking himself 'What happened to Ori?'.

Gaeun is the type to grow jealous of her own kids and drown them in the bathtub all while people saying “poor mother, it was the husband’s fault she turned out that way” NO, no poor anything - and shame on her friends! Report her behavior to the adults and get her psychological help, a simple “I like you” from her crush won’t fix that shitty personality she has - she almost committed murder more than twice! She’s a sociopath don’t sympathize with her!

This is a really beautiful story so I hope it continues!

Interesting....

this really is a good one

Would have rated this higher had it not been for Gaeun. Everyone deserves kindness, but she should have been the one who came forward and apologized to Ori. Instead, she got off scot-free without so much as a sorry. What she did was obviously wrong and I wish the author didn't overlook it by justifying her behaviour. She didn't even have any character development.

finished but labeled as ongoing~

Chapter 1 - WAIIT!! I THOUGHT THIS WAS JUST GONNA BE A TYPICAL BULLY STORY! BUT IT’S A STORY ABOUT A CHARACTER IN AN UNFINISHED STORY.. ok ok, I see you.

Art nop. But like she isn't whith the black haired guy he's with his childhood friend

wow she is strong and weak at the same time but still i like her poor her

Clearly something happened to Gaeun(or whatever it’s spelled) to make her like that and the author will reveal it sooner or later but no matter how bad her past I don’t care because every time she shows up i get so pissed off. How dare this bitch be so rude to baby Ori. Gaeun doesn’t deserve a happy ending.

I like how this sotry is developing i like how the boy wiht the green eyes helps ori and how hes making her less scared of everyone I liek the friends in it of how they become friends with her and end up helping eher through hard time.-sigh- if only people were this nice in real life....