Just finished and as interesting as it was I'm disappointed. What was the point? I mean they could have just let him leave with all the others and been satisfied that he still lived on in a sense. I'm also upset at the brother and his none caring attitude. I get the he was just looking out for his brother and analyzed the situation for the best possible action but he was still too clinical about his actions. Everything seemed to revolve around his curiosity and he didn't have to answer for nothing.
Anyways, it was an interesting story but a little too wordy at times. I would have loved if he would have went all badass and ripped the transmitter out like yeah you ain't controlling me but I still help you out. The kids were getting on my nerves too. I mean still down and stay put. It's like they didn't realize the danger and then she had the nerve to tell the other kid that he's selfish. I mean she was selfish putting herself in danger as well as her brother who followed her around.
I just finished reading Verdant Lord and I really enjoyed it , but the ending left me wanting more ! So I hope someday the Author will write a second book to add this one , like how it's progress is on the another the new world is doing . Thanks for sharing this and to all the people who work so hard on this ! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ! <3
Anyways, it was an interesting story but a little too wordy at times. I would have loved if he would have went all badass and ripped the transmitter out like yeah you ain't controlling me but I still help you out. The kids were getting on my nerves too. I mean still down and stay put. It's like they didn't realize the danger and then she had the nerve to tell the other kid that he's selfish. I mean she was selfish putting herself in danger as well as her brother who followed her around.