Comments of Villainess Maker

Spoilers ahead!




Although the manhwa was rushed at the end, the storytelling and beautiful art kept me hooked! About the story, I was intrigued about how the protagonist was actually a god, since I enjoy stories with twists like that. The ending could've been significantly better if the team working on this had more time and breaks to work on this, we could've had an epilogue focusing on the romance!

its ok for a light read but the story goes all over the place and gets a bit more rushed to the end, this could just be me but towards the end bc it was so rushed the story started to not make sense? anyways it was alright

completed

My rating: 8/10
The ML is a possessive red flag who teaches the FL how to become strong. I like that the main characters have growth and aren't one-dimensional. But there are some characters who get introduced as someone important just to quickly fade into the background. The plot has unused potential.

TRANSMIGRATION, VILLAINESS
The FL possesses the body of her own novel's villainess Aila who chases the crown prince. She tries to act differently but time starts to repeat itself. That a notorious warlock perceives and comes to kill her. But as she bears hatred for god like him they team up and seek to break free from her plan.

SPOILER:

Aila:
She's actually a god who was killed by her fellow gods bc she gave the humans too much out of love and made them greedy. Her body was disseminated all over the human world, her cold heart left to rule over it and her soul send to be reincarnated into a human body multiple times. In her last life she wrote the novel about the og heroine and possessed the villainess's body as she made a promise to her. She's originally a pushover but changes and learns to stand up for herself and her own happiness from the warlock. She ends up living the rest of the villainess's life in her human body and then returns to heaven as a god together with the warlock who bound his soul to hers.

Killian:
He's the warlock who 500 years ago lived his life as a slave being used for human experiments bc he had extraordinary magic power. He played to die but the FL's cold heart didn't intervene so he consumed multiple of the pieces of the FL's shattered body and got condemned to live an immortal life and forever remain young losing the right to be reincarnated. He then destroyed the kingdom he lived in and founded his own welcoming all the other persecuted warlocks. After meeting the FL he finds joy in life and becomes really obsessive. He's dangerous and ready to kill people of he benefits from it, he's even ready to destroy the world to get her back at some point. At first he doesn't want for her to be god but later he realises that it doesn't matter to him as long as he can stay with her. Which he does. Forever.

Charlotte:
She's the novel's FL coming from a poor family and believes that she can only get what she wants by making the men around her love her. She's the typical weak "damsel in distress" who only thinks about her own goals and hides behind an angelic mask. But because of the FL's acceptance she learns to love her true self and abandons the stupid and arrogant crown prince to open a business with the FL.

is this actually the ending????

read everything loved it

loved it at the start but throughout the story the art got worse and the storyline felt rushed

THIS IS FIVE STARSSS. i mean like i say this about every five star but this is truly so good. like echo or alia or whatever is typical in the way that she “made the world” but THE YUYS I FORGIT HIS NAME? he was so different. it was so romantic and sweet yet sohhhhoototoottt. the story was good the characters were amazing idk so good.

March 13, 2024 @7:47 am - it was good but ending was lacking.

Everything was good except the ending

Pas fan chap 4 arrêt

The quality was falling in terms of art and consistency in story details. It attempts to tie the loose ends via a cyclical domino effect revelation, but maybe because they were rushed, it wasn't executed well.

Started out good; the plot was interesting, the dynamics between the characters were interesting. Rushed toward the end, a little disappointed by it.

Love the ML uwu
Ending was rushed and shit but hehe tattoos and piercings is chefs kiss

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