I get the rough idea what's going on.. IMO The author made it unnecessary excess-complicated, adds up to some lost in translation, makes it confusing & difficult read.
Disjointed story continuity makes the plot difficult to understand, therefore you really can’t get into the character’s feelings, so the romance feels like an afterthought.
what the fuck is the first story about? i dont understand anything. i dont really understand the second story but it's cute and atleast there is romance. they're making the first story way too hard to understand.
The beginning was confusing af. Was an entire chapter missing?? Doesn’t help that the characters’ faces were similar. But the story ended up interesting albeit there was some missed potential.
the solution of today might be the problems of tomorrow, and there starts the story of two boy who suffered the consequences of these so called solutions reality is stranger than fiction and when many believe in something, it's hard to make the difference between what we think is true, and what really is true in both cases the author ride the very thin line of perceptions of what we define as "real" and how it impacts our life when our own definition of "real" might be slightly different fro what is commonly accepted. it's a difficult exercise, i wish i was able to read the original to have a final opinion, as i think it mostly works, yet seems a bit hard to follow in some places (the beginning in particular), but as the game needs to hide a lot informations for the story to unfold i'd guess it could have been done in a clearer way