Comments of When I Close My Eyes, My Heart Beats

That was cuter than I thought I'd be

3 5-3-24 Moreeew HAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHQHAHAHA

Purely here for smut, not as good as author's other work "Save me, Will you?"

Coworkers, office workers, boss, mutual pining, smut, smutty af, cute, supernatural abilities

nice lil one shot ig

Supernatural???? Was super cute and I reccomend MAKING MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE

Good quick read. It’s cute :)

Shit this so short

That was cute

Ugh this is so cute I wish there was more!! Actually teared up when he closed his eyes and could hear his heartbeat! The art is so pretty and the pacing was pretty decent actually especially for such a short story.

Dude this needs to be a whole whooping 40 plus chapters

Simply amazing. A 2023 read being archived.

9/10

I wanted more... Uuugh...

actually amazing

Absolute crime. HOW DARE THIS BE SO SHORT IT HAS SO MUCH POTENTIAL FOR FLUFF MATERIAL

short story but with a hot smut

Shesssshhhh

Cute but short

Short, puppy top into suave boss btm. Like the art n good story (consent and translation could be a bit better). Good for cute blushing n quick sex