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2023-10-14 18:47
Tags: #Action #reincarnation #strong male lead #Isekai
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NF 14
Good art but a boring story?
2023-07-10 22:20
Tags: #Interesting
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Ew narcissist
Why is this like a manhua sigh
How can I say it... it should be good... but it's not?
Like... mc and god are hot, the art is well made, the murim×fantasy is interesting... but... noobie author god + mc author so unpopular he gave up the career creating the novel on the go... is bad. It screams plot holes and plot armor. The rule of thumb to a good writing is not to insert yourself (author) as main character. That's basically the opposite of what they did... feels like the novel will be unstructured and with a weak world building with everything always working out in favor of the mc.
The comic in general isn't focused on comedy nor action and doesn't give the reader any sort of expectation for what will happen in the end and how it will get there. It's not funny enough, not serious enough, not action oriented enough and doesn't have an harmonious balance between them. The god and mc personalities are not a good match either... they neither chash nor harmonize...
All in all... it's boring...
Eh. I only read 2 chapters but it's kinda...cringey? I dunno, it's like it was written by a 3rd grader, but I guess that might be intentional. I just don't like how the story is made up at random, but again, that is the point I'm pretty sure. Idk, maybe I'll come back later. It was just kinda boring.
Interesting but not my kind of plot
5 fav its nice mc protagonist creating future with God
2023-05-01 13:57
Tags: #interesting #fantasy #comedy #reincarnation #action #novel #fucking awesome #strong male lead
please keep updating, i'm desperate for more chapters!!