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2024-02-07 16:04
Tags: #college
Passing of story is pretty stumbled but I like it despite that seme is hot as well it's just average storyline i actually like it when uke is insecure but dude is running away every time at least seme is communicating type otherwise it would be a disastrous relationship it shouldn't have end like that i wanted to see more.
yk when you’re like i’m not an expert idk if i can critique this well yeah this one is so annoying that even a non expert can tell the pacing is off and that the characters don’t really grow and that the story is flimsy basically just a catalyst for the r18 scenes….
2024-01-07 04:33
Tags: #❤Yaoi❤
O final vey, a historia so acaba. Sem extra sem nada lkkkkkkk
Dnf. Porn in like 2 pages is too abrupt 4 me.
Cute, ig. Basic storyline but the fake p*ssy thing was funny, ngl.
Couldn't finished reading this, the plot is so bad such a shame when it has pretty art style too...
Pacing was odd, but not bad. Liked that although they had petty misunderstandings they communicated without anything crazy happening beforehand.
That rapist friend was so unnecessary and irrelevant cause he like disappeared half way through. But also why he trying to break up a couple? Gross
2023-08-23 22:12
Tags: #Pinning #Misunderstandings #Miscommunication #Sexual Assault
Oh cmon, why won't you let him put it in just once. also, very fast paced. chapter eight sucks ass, like bruh, just fucking talk.
Cute mais redondant dans l’histoire
2023-07-14 13:45
Tags: #He's not straight #Fast paced
the "He's not straight" tag lmao
His ass got assaulted by him and they just casually let him be around them still with no consequences?????
Average « yaoi » story, bottom dude is dumb and a crybaby, the top dude is overprotective (which is not always bad but not in this one) and of course you have to include a sexual assault followed by a sex scene after he got assaulted ?? And it was cringe on top of that whatever ☠☠ im being a hater rn but this wasnt it
