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2023-12-06 18:09
Tags: #yaoi #Romance
Msh baca samapai ch 5
I’ve never written a review before, so i might be sloppy and all over the place. First off, the artwork is nice. The plot, at first, was quite intriguing. It is sort of cliche, yes, but it had potential. Learning what led to his grudge, however, was kind of weird. The mystery was built was off quite nicely, but learning that it was a grudge from elementary school ( grade 3 ) was a bit of a let down after all we were hyped about. It does make sense to remember the only one who showed kindness to you in your childhood, but him holding a grudge was quite a comment on his childishness / immaturity. The relationship was also very fast paced. It didn’t feel like they had enough time to develop a deeper relationship, even after all the push and pull, and the “heartfelt talk” they had. The plot with the actual class president and second male lead is also
lost quite quickly. they could’ve added so much more to the story, but were instead used in a very shallow and hasty manner, as if the author was just rushing to get it over with. It was all over so quick - falling in love, forgiveness, deception, mystery, the plot. all of it. It was all right, yes, and works for someone who’s reading to pass time, or for the smut.
… the art is pretty but the story is abysmal at best….. smh
hes using his guilt to fuel his character development of becoming a better man for our puppy lol