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Clunky in art, story and translations. Feels more like a first draft than a finished product. Everything is rushed in a way that ruins any possibility of excitement for the next panel. Half the time the time I'm not even sure what I'm supposed to be looking at- as if panels are missing.
Story throws us into what happened to MC in a very unimpactful way. Feels akin to reading a children's book, where they avoid giving as much detail as possible- with no plans to ever share it with us the reader. It's hard to feel any real motivation from MC. He barely looks upset, he easily earns the money for a new machine, he quickly gets into the game, he magically finds a man who grants him special powers... all within the first 2 chapters. It's simply jarring the way its thrown together.
Stopped at: 14,
Came cause of cover art - it wasn't as good. Disappointed.
the art makes me want to kill myself.
2023-11-20 10:11
Tags: #Ｏ(≧∇≦)Ｏ
pacing is awful. we know nothing about mc. things happen with zero context or info. things just happen to follow a formula and not for a story
2023-11-19 19:24
Tags: #Strong Male Lead
Although I already knew what it would be because there's bunch of series like this theme but it seems ok
2023-11-20 10:08
Tags: #Adventure #Game World
5
Okay not much has happened, but my predictions: this manga will be interesting enough, likely a bit cringe, and have poorly written female characters. Hoping to be wrong
