MOST FAVORITE ONE-SHOT OF ALL TIME

ABSOLUTELY PERFECT!!!!!! MY DREAM KIND OF YAOI. DIFFERENT OMFFGGGGG!!!! GONNA READ IT AGAIN AND AGAIN AND AGAIN AND AGAIN.

The flow of the story is so soft, slowly moving and pure love. THIS IS JUST TOO MUCH! I CAN'T CALM DOWN AND IT BROUGHT ME TO TEARS DAMN. How I wish there are more story like this but 50 chapters and above, because I want more story like this. Ughh, it's one-shot, a wonderful one-shot, a perfect one-shot story.

Waaaaaaaa!!!!!!! Why must this be a one-shot??! Why?!?!! This is so cute! I want a continuation! They date, they break up then start a new beginning.

WHY IS THIS A ONE SHOT?!?! I WAS EXPECTING FOR MORE!!! DAMN!!!

Damn! I want more! I love the uke's personality hihi but the seme, I hate how experienced he is, I mean how he already had sex with a lot of girls (well it's kinda obvious even though they didn't directly mention it. Yeah, I'm already jumping into conclusion) BUT I REALLY WANT MOREEEEE! I LOVE HOW THE SEME SNEAKED BESIDE THE UKE HIHI.

One of the best one shot ever! It's all in one! I can't believe how they've made a plot like this composed of 31 pages or less. Wow. I WANT MORE!

this makes my heart cry... he did take her hand tho. but in a different way
"I've grown tired of waiting. this time, as promised, i'm going to take your hand." :(( can i have someone like this please? i love it. i love how they'd waited for each other for 50 long years.

definitely my cup of tea, wow, damn.

GHAAAAAAAAAAAAD I LOVE IT SO MUCHHHHHHHHHH