beta
This writer is such an ass. The build up had potential and it fell flat at the end. I was confused why this had low rating till i got to the end lmao
better than i thought
well they never really fell for each other and the pacing is a bit weird but its good
Main story is fine but i dont understand the authors thought process with the one shot why tf she decided to make them step siblings?
lmfaoooo this guys scary face is fucking hilarious. The fact he said should i buy a house AHAAHA
Wouldve been better but it went off the rails and was overdramatic
I do not trust that seme
good but didnt do anything for me
hmm it was very mid and cliche, yuzuru is hot but what an ass. he got mad at the uke for being a slut but really he was the one having sex? he even raped the uke because of that. just retarded. i wanted to see hiashi make yuzuru suffer a bit
ok multiple thoughts, one when the translator said ‘writing as bad as the last season of GOT’ I SHAT MYSELF SO TRUE LMAO. also the person who said they hate translators notes, i usually agree but these were funny. ngl i even dropped a story over an annoying translator once. btw i also have multiple tatts so i like this story but on the face the scars were hotter no cap wish they didnt give him a face tattoo
Pornographer