@24
The plot's not bad, which is why I stuck around but the negatives keep nagging me at the back of my mind so I'm giving up. 1: IAN, DROP DEAD, SICKO. 2: The way ML had sex w/ MC right after MC got raped and still had semen inside. Do I NEED to list the 1001 ways that's screwed up and just wrong? Even if MC doesn't remember, his body was clearly spent and hurt. The rape was disgusting and uncomfortable to watch, but their sex after was just as. 3: Someone's gonna say smth important, interrup-
@06
Lol, this don't even make no sense. General will abandon MC to deal w/ spirits if MC does anything lewd, but will abandon him if he doesn't have sex w/ ML. Meanwhile, ML can have sex wherever. General wants his sword. To get it, MC needs to get rid of an incubus, but can't use General's powers if MC is intimate w/ ML. General still abandons MC after being intimate w/ incubus w/o getting the sword??? MC MAGICALLY FORGETS HOW TO HAVE SEX/KISS after only 5y of not doing it. Brilliance. MIMS.
@02
ML be glowing in his own self-pity. DA victims who forget the pain their loved ones goes through and keep going though abuse w/ a self-sacrificing, self-pitying defensive attitude are the worst. Defend the abuser but take out anger on your loved ones. People get tired and will stop caring. Their hearts will become cold to your complaints. They will not pity you. They'll be hurt and will leave. NOT ALL DA victims are like this, but they exist. ML is this type AND emotionally abusive too.
@06
Another sick psychotic kidnapper/rapist. Yawn. Nothing even remotely interesting. Just nauseating ish. Why do people like this?
@53[Asura]
@80[Asura]
Beyond help. It just gets more boring, irritating and annoyingly cliche the more you read. It literally solo-killed its own interesting plotlines for w/e is supposed to be going on rn. Maybe it'll get better, but I'm not patient enough to endure these terribly-done parts (EVERY part that involves girls; meet a girl irl, please) for a few chaps of action.
@121
Weird how it got worse after they actually got together. Hate their rel, didn't think I would. It's kinda annoying and I have no motivation to continue this at all. One of those drops that don't immediately get cut but by the time you realise, a long time has passed and you had been avoiding it cause in truth, you didn't like it anymore.
@01[Asura]
If you've read past the 1st chap, I highly recommend reevaluating your lack of morals, deductive ability and reading comprehension. To read this, get rid of all your IQ pts, your conscience and forget every actual good plot you've read so this feels less like the trash it is.
@03[Asura]
I give myself props for getting this far, giving it a chance after that pathetic mess of a 1st chap. You don't have to guess if it's bad writing, cause it's literally that terrible. An ability drops from the sky while he's cleaning and doing nothing relevant to being a doctor. He doesn't gain it from a book/artifact or anything. He just awakens as a player in medieval times? It's not a game setting/a norm/isekai either? Just so??? MIMS. Not everyone's going to overlook lazy writing.
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