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No, but if MC's a mix, right, doesn't that mean he won't be completely satisfied w/ ML either? If he's both sub and dom, he'd need plays to satisfy both. If he's in sub role all the time, won't he dissatisfied after a while again? MC would def need to have plays w/ a sub sometimes cause he's still a dom. UP: Even ML said the same thing at the end. It doesn't make sense otherwise, so this is bull. Bout his dom side can't be satisfied anymore. MIMS.

Ian is literally the epitome of the WORST kind of person you can be. I hope he forever chokes on vampire dick while crying being forced to watch a vid of ML and MC being in love and far away from his disgusting scum face. Like off yourself, bro. Become a vamp's sex toy to save your own life, sure, but ask that vamp to rape and make your crush a vamp against his will so you can be w/ said crush, drop dead. You're worse than sick in the head. People like this deserve the worst torture.

One of the stupidest plots I've EVER read. Plot holes larger than life. Logic scarce w/ this one. Author, what even, lol, bye. How does one forget to kiss/have sex/get bad at it? Author's kink: acting like a virgin w/ no pride who can only be dominated cause they're so bad. I won't even laugh. ML disgusts me anyway. Next.

I can see this being all drama and no HE. DNF. UP: GIRLLL, the spoilers I just read suggest I may be RIGHT. Bro. Lol. It reminded me of a psychological read cause ML just rubbed me that way. Idk what'll happen but reading the comments w/o reading the story and seeing them suffering w/o suffering myself, is entertainment in its own right. Schadenfreude is a heck of a word. Don't come for me.

These guys are so foolish together, they're cute, lol.

One of the most disgusting things I've ever read. If you're triggered by DA, don't read. I'm so infuriated and repulsed. ML being in abusive rel's was ML just trying to purposefully gaslight/emotionally hurt/manipulate MC. ML should drop dead w/ his "lonely and afraid" abusive ex. MC deserves better. To weaponise being abused against someone you love, you're the lowest. If only you 2 understand each other, go off. Just leave MC out your pity act every time you get beat. MC's suffered enough.

Why no switch though? Idk why authors make these rel's so rigid. But it was really good anyway, despite how short it was. Well-written.

ACTUAL CP: A condescending psycho rapist x A superiority-complex good-for-nothing scum. These 2 are the lowest of the lows. Hate both these losers and Mr. Punishment Advocate Accomplice. No kinda identifiable plot or pts of interest. Boy, bye. Drop dead or smth.

Bro, okay, but them grandmas kinda highkey creepy, wth. Can he sue for sexual harassment? Poor guy has all his flowers exposed and out on display. "Insane, illogical death." Most exciting gameplay I've ever seen to date, PAHAHAHAHAHA, NOOOOOOOOOO. Bro died cause they designed the char too tall. Is no one else worried Ellie said that guy in the pic was in his 20's and rich AND IN JAIL? How do you sell that scam? His con artist skill lvl have to be unreal. SN: Fukuma is terrifying.

So lame. The story had some promise but it's beyond down the drain, by now. Also, if you don't know how to write girls, don't write so many of them into your story. It makes a bad story even worse.