Art and worldbuilding is good. The story starts strong with mystery and wholesome comedy as well as cute romance. But tell me why… TELL ME WHY it fell off so hard, became so basic, rushed and !!! the male lead went from greener than the forest to icky for me. And yes the reason is that he simply ignored her confession, played hot and cold, gave mixed signals, had anger outbursts at her. When they got together I was honestly malding. And so disappointed that the fml turned into a doormat?!
This would be a really cool story frfr if the tl wasnt this bad. They cant even get the gender of the mc right :(
Its been months and i am still ticked
I will be harsh: 1. We all know who father and daughter are. Please stop.
2. We dont want prophetic dreams of them as adults when the ml is a child, thank you.
3. We dont like mindlessly obsessed male leads that threaten to kill any other man the fml just looks at.
4. For the love of god, we want the supposedly smart fml to stop being a not even dense but straightup oblivious person.
i do feel slightly aggravated by this story, thank you for listening to my rant
Im sorry. Im so sorry Im picky with the art but i cant help but judge it, especially after I have been catfished by the cover
Ok. So. He kissed a bird and he liked it, the taste of the birds cherry chapstick . No but seriously he falls in love and kisses a bird. Sorry, yes, you think thats cute? I wont judge you I say… thatsa lie btw. I felt weirded out the whole time. The art is…ok, the story is ok. This isnt much of a unique story BUT he literally fell in love with a bird and. Kissed. The. Beak?!? Why are all the commenters on the story willing to overlook that?
Overhyped. Not bad bad but I dislike the extreme fandom. The father figure? Kinda sucks. His personality? Either cruel pretty boi douche with hidden wounds or whatever or stoopid daughter infatuated but somehow not that wholesome father. Its maybe two stars? Idk. You can read it, its not bad. Just makes me mad. Arts pretti tho
This should be in a higher tier, this story is nice, actually. The female lead is like a cool big sis typa person. Just…the male lead is so…annoying. He is a literal manchild.
Cute idea but boring and nonsensical execution, moving at snails pace. There are cute moments but the boredom drowns out the magic. Im patient, but not patient for an anticlimactic drop. The side characters? I dont even remember any, because they had no importance. This universe is only for the main characters and that i dislike
A recycled plot of reincarnation in modern society, him suddenly finding success because hes „in the body that belongs to him“ really leaves a bitter taste in my mouth and i wont read further.
also I havent read idol stories before but this just doesnt feel like my jam.
Put this down as soon as it touched my hands like a hot potato cause wow, that story has bad storytelling.
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LOL i checked this out bc it sounded interesting and ngl i agree with a lot of these
college student empress i couldnt stand the ml
true education i see a lot of that genre being rated really high but idk... i just dont think its that interesting? disciplining/whipping kids into place and gore revenge stories where the whole plot is bullying bullies are ... weird? i feel like those cater to either dominance/superiority freaks or victims (to each their own then)
hunter world's gardener i TRIED MY HARDEST to like and push through 5 chapters but agreed it was executed so poorly
(perhaps those get better since therye rated high? but nah i didnt want to put myself through the grueling first 20-50 chapters of pain)
Omg, was just flipping through my lists on a friday morning to rewrite some bad sentences and then I saw you commented a year ago HAHA never expected anyone to peek at what I wrote
And so elaborately at that.
Im really happy you agree with what I had written back then hahahaha. I think the school violence webtoons are luckily also going out of style. But maybe thats just because Rofa/ Hunter Fantasy are in…
Also, just wanted to say I really love yoinking good stories from your profile a lot!! Huge huge thanks
@Langria
Omg, was just flipping through my lists on a friday morning to rewrite some bad sentences and then I saw you commented a year ago HAHA never expected anyone to peek at what I wrote
And so elaborately at that.
Im really happy you agree with what I had written back then hahahaha. I think the school violence webtoons are luckily also going out of style. But maybe thats just because Rofa/ Hunter Fantasy are in…
Also, just wanted to say I really love yoinking good stories from your profile a lot!! Huge huge thanks