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The smut's awesome. First, no rape. Second, they reverse fuck. Third, the original seme realizes he loves being roughly fucked by his boyfriend, so probably in the future, he prefers being the uke. Also, due to the smutty night, they become a more compatible couple both physically/sexually & emotionally: the original top was a cold horny jerk at the beginning of the story & the original uke's a delicious cute golden retriever who knows what he wants & becomes a more confident man & boyfriend.
Erotic hentai level smut. You wanna d*ck down the uke. But that's the only positive thing about this BL. The plot's being written oddly: abrupt ending, plotholes, loose ends, unsolved problems. The past bad deeds of some characters're just brushed aside. Also, the relationship bw the 2 MCs is built up in a very odd way & you have a feeling that the whole point of this BL is just smut, the rest is filler. Shame, the characters're fun & the story held some potential.
5 STARS FOR THE SMUT
It has great potential but the plot is executed badly. Bad pacing, the plot's constantly being built on miscommunication bw the MCs, the seme isn't stupid but actually naive/innocent/inexperienced (the uke says about him that he's stupid & slow); it's easy to misinterpret the uke's behavior & acts; AND actually the uke forces himself on the seme (aka DUBCON). I get that the concept was powerful/charismatic/experienced uke but come on.... this could have been written better.
14 Chapters (Complete)
super short, seke, semexseme
puppy uke
This BL's peak comedy+romance combo, but the relationship started catastrophically, with the seme forcing himself on the uke bc of a silly misunderstanding on both sides. The first chapters were building up a fun dynamic, then there was a disastrous period (I almost dropped it). Then, suddenly (after clearing up the misunderstaning somehow), this became the sweetest, cutest, most adorable, & romantic BL I've ever read, and no, I'm not a romantic type of person. It's very smutty, the smut's GOOD.
A smutty & cute romance omegaverse BL that starts mid but gets better from ch3 & by the end you root for the couple. The relationship's rushed/starts abruptly, but it can be explained w their compatibility (they match as an α/Ω couple). Non-toxic couple: the MCs're sweet, cute, adorable, kind. The seme's an innocent crybaby puppy, while the uke's a power bottom (like Yoo Hajin from Honey Bear). The art's good, the smut's good - at some places excellent-, & the seme's design is topnotch.
There's a big twist at the end of ch 1.
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