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"Nice to meet you! I'm Tobari, a human!"
"...yeah, I can tell!" (tension dropping)
We've got 2 maincharacters (minus the gate and three boxes) and major PDA at the entrance - and all of that within 7 pages!
I guess the storyline would fit onto a beermat but who cares ^^
(And I SO want to send this to Jehovah's Witnesses...)
"Eat me"
Yes, Sir.
Bad feeling - bad feeling of falling in love at first sight
Kaname receives a confession and falls in love at first sight, only to realize afterwards, that it wasn't a girl but a boy who confessed.
9 Pages, and it's totally enough to groan afterwards - 'cause it's only 9 pages.
...hottest sumata I've seen so far ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄
It's perfect as it is but still I wish there was a second chapter ^^
Thank you, Kiichi.
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"I'm haunting thee <3"
Tobari