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nah this 10/10 potential jesus christ…
i love it, the premise is a bit generic as it’s been done before but it’s done in a way that is truly unique
i love the two of them, i love this story tbh. i think the whole second chapter is lovely development is so good for their love story and their characters? it’s truly top tier and just so lovely. i can’t wait for more. i really do like this story so far.
10/10 just letting it cook
i think the rape is a little odd especially as that’s the first thing we get introduced to and we don’t know anything regarding their past. i also don’t like how he lied but yeah. i don’t get why everyone has their panties in a twist over the high school body thing idk he was listed as a 3rd year in uni and he is it’s just his body is smaller lol. i’m 18 now and my body is like the same i haven’t grown since starting hs so i just find it as a convenient little plot hole.
chap 2
pretty good i need to see more tbh to have a proper conclusion i think them having sex is a little out of nowhere because i thought that we’d have more progress before getting to that point. but anyways. it feels much of the same from the past but does the author know that? lol? is that even intentional? it’s not very clear their present day. if it was gonna be so unclear why did u even make it into flashbacks that we’d get piece by piece.. cmon
chap 8
i actually quite like it, band stories are always so fire for some reason. uke is a bassist too so fire. i like their dynamic and style but i think the fact there’s something looming over him and he doesn’t know is pretty eh… i can’t get a grasp on it so we’ll see if it’s good or bad
chap 2
apparently this story gets even more insane and i’m locked in. i just wish their love story was a little more realistic. like bro really fell in love over nothing. at least make him a little more crazy for me to believe it
i loved these stories! this author is very creative and makes very interesting stories. the first one was my favorite wish we got to see more of that
5.1 completed
so peak uke needa fall in love already
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ukes look and vibe back in high school was chefs kiss my god
seme tamed that???????? jeez…
every part of this story was peak genuinely
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