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A:3★ S:1★ C:2.5★ OR:2★
GENUINELY so mid. IK its pwp but the story makes literally no sense. the pov and narration is all over the place which makes it hard to follow wtf is going on. i kept reading just to figure out wtf is happening with kylot trying to take his family down, but that thread genuinely just gets dropped the second they meet his brother at the tower. like did he want to bankrupt their family just for spite? and the thread with rabi being a bounty hunter just gets dropped too
A:5★ S:4★ C:4★ OR:4★
Pain. just pain. there's a fine line between a well written tragedy and gratuitous torture p*rn and this story uses it as a jump rope. This story shows the cycle of abuse and the tragedy of circumstances in a visceral way, somehow both being realistic and human with the way this kind of trauma can change a person's life and psyche while also fitting in at least one graphic r*pe scene per chapter that I honestly could have done without. It really contains multitudes.
The Worst Guy in the Universe