∆ Wasted Potential ∆

TW: Rape and Assault by Ghost.
The idea of moving into a house haunted by an extremely horny ghost isn't bad. I've met a bunch of lewd characters in other stories who would actively track down that house just for the experience.
I liked that the ghost started slow and focused on pleasure... But I would probably have made it even slower, starting with warm and safe embraces and possible wet dreams before escalating.
I would also explore the possibilities of communication to ensure con

TW: Blackmailed/threatened with bad fortune.
The idea of an App sending you quests to help you be honest with yourself, while also exploring possible kinks is pretty rad.
I wouldn't make use of the whole 'if you don't something bad will happen' trope, though. Especially not when considering the reveal of who is actually behind the app.
I absolutely loved when the couple talked about RP fantasies. Communication is so hot!

TW: Blackmail, Rape, Forced, Rapist Raped, T_T
This story had the potential setup for exploring how the internet have impacted sexual curiosity. Instead it was just rape, tricks, force, and a flat, messed up, 'happy ending' that just made me angry.
With actual character building, communication, and consent this could have been so peak. Filled with blushes and curiosity to promote healthy fucking.

Honestly, never wanted to rewrite a story so bad before. Actually considered rejoining Wattpad.

I would have developed the plot and characters a bit more outside of the smut. The characters seems pretty rounded but the story sadly leaves out those parts to truly explore gender and sexuality. This setup has so much potential.

TW: Drunk assault, rapey
I had to reread this just to remember what I wanted to change in my ideal world. Basically, Seme likes Uke who writes BL Novels as a side hustle. When Uke starts staring at the Seme randomly, he confesses that he is looking at the Seme for inspiration to a novel. Trial fake dating follows, but Seme becomes jealous over his own thoughts, gets drunk and forces himself on the Uke.
That is what I would change. Even with selective reading there is no consent at all. Sad.

TW: kinda dubcon at times.
The Lead is gloriously openminded and I would love to explore that while also making sure the two others used communication more.

It has gorgeous art. Some semi-decent plot about a tentacle monster plant from a destroyed planet seeking revenge. And a decent exploration of humans and their emotions.

It has all that, and yet, does nothing with it except rape and setting up for incest, I guess?


T.T
Like, it would even make sense in a twisted way to have a rape scene if the tentacles could only be defeated by that, and still... Nah... Just, break whatever blocks his libido so baby bro can get a taste, I guess...? Bruh.