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Pretty good story. Somewhat cliffhanger ending, but I believe he'll make it. The reversing was a plus, though. Last two were meh. Incest warning for the last two.
Something I really enjoy is characters in denial about being in love (because there is potential for tugging at the heartstrings) and then coming to realization of it, and this one really takes the cake. I really like the water motif throughout the story.
Art: 10/10
Plot: 8/10
Characters: 7/10 (again, one shots are a bit short to get to really get attached to characters)
Ahh I loved this story, even if Kiyotake forgave Udou (the older brother) a bit too quickly. His negativity could be annoying to some people, true. But I don't believe he was pessimistic on purpose. Like, he just doubts himself very, very much, and I can't blame him for that. But some comments saying that in real life, no one's going to be as patient as Kiyotake to chase after Udou like that is true...but he did. And like others, the last line was probably what got to me the most
Unrequited love, and it makes me have the feels. The way Kengo had to live with his mistake, and watch Hidetoshi go through all that. But he atones for it in the end, I suppose. I hope that ex does fine in the future, even with those bad things he did. He is somewhat pitiable.
A short story about an anthropomorphic piano withstanding the tests of time and history in order to find her way home. A lot of this author’s works are really moving, actually (though the plot of the others may be a bit harder to understand).
Art: 7/10 the girls are cute but for males, this artist has a kink for small heads and giant bodies (and the occasional long long neck)
Plot: 10/10 short but powerful
Characters: story is not character focused
Ahhh these two were cuties. The term "devilish side" made it sound weird, but their personalities together was really nice imo.
Aaahhh this author's works are very beautiful. Definitely can't wait until this continues.
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