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i loved the concept at first but it just kept circlejerking itself off with no real development. why is this a reincarnation webcomic in the first place?? it does nothing with its concepts! it's just a disappointment because there is SO MUCH potential but they just waste it on stupid bullshit. the way they introduce world building is so half-assed and expository, i feel as trapped as the two main characters who, by the way, have the personality of a fucking potato. AND THEY DONT EVER DEVELOP!!!
hello it's me again. i literally have a "wholesome demons" list but this just aint it chief. not much about it makes sense, you literally get zero feeling of character's true intentions n' shit and the comedy suffers because of it. people will just do things and say things that just work out in MC's favor without any real consequence, almost like a story bending to a mary sue's will. so sad that wasted potential will be wasted :pensive: sometimes simplicity is better
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