Metamorphisis

I usually view the sentence mistakes as practice for both the translators and I, them for English in general and me for structure and grammar. That being said... Auto-translation programs are useful for some single/low word usage, but sentence structure and context in English is complex. Eyes reading while my bleeding confused crazy is. (Reading while my confused eyes are bleeding is crazy.)

This is/was a repeat of the description of the above story. Though I think both have been altered. Maybe I'll go back and re-read both of these, but not right now.

On top of the translation issues, this is a little... It's cute and all, but the love lives of children is... well... Not something I wanted to witness. Sure, let them all meet as kids, but matters of the heart really should come later in life. I mean, with their ages... cooties are a thing.

I would like to say I know what's going on... at first I thought I knew and could follow, but now... not so much.

(Let's try some rhyme boys and girls.) Twas not the translation which took a hit, twas the content that turned to shit. (I knew you could.) Keeping an eye anyway, but not holding my breath.

This...the female lead is, at times, annoyingly childish so I kinda skimmed through the more idiotic shenanigans, but over all it was all right. Her juvenile mentality...(Can't chalk it up to culture because of the other characters, who are pretty good, so...) Anyway, it started with decent translation, went to pot, then it started completely over around chap 32-35 (can't remember exactly), then it got better again toward the end.

Focus, damn it! I'm tired of this one. It started well. It WAS interesting, with a good plot, but no more. Rivals, side plots, machinations and the kitchen sink are getting in the way. GET ON WITH IT! Yeah, at this point I'd rather try reading Hemingway again, and I HATE Hemingway, he puts me to sleep every damn time.

From okay to bad to okay again. So, this goes along as a 'save the world from evil' crusade while falling in wuv via arrangement. It's cute, a little gory, some bad parenting action, a confused little brother, some good friends and a couple of nutters. Question: If the world is embraced by beautiful death, what's the point of ruling it? I mean, everything's dead. Not bad otherwise.

In the beginning...the translations...'twas not textbook, but not bad, then, somewhere in the middle some idiots took over and it's BAD, jesus-h-christ it's bad, then gets better, then a repeat of bad. Anywho... She's a soul transferal, modern death to novel life, as the villainess slated for execution. She tries niceties to change that, but the story is altered and she decides she's gonna fight for him, herself and those she cares for. He's cute and caring.

The translations bounce between okay and WTF. The story is fairly straight forward, some minor intrigue, though it wasn't difficult to determine the culprit a few chapters in. Mostly it's just a sweetie-pie wuv story in a fantasy setting with some time reversal, discrimination, abuse and egotistical fault transference. The plot isn't bad.