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Chapter 1 is a NO. The seme is a jerk. It was not necessary to say hurtful things to the u...

Yuanyuanyuan January 30, 2021 9:48 am

Chapter 1 is a NO. The seme is a jerk. It was not necessary to say hurtful things to the uke when rejecting him. He was just mean. His excuse about his father treating him badly is so lame. He was just a mean guy who's full of himself. He doesn't like things out of control so he tried to take back the uke even if it was by force and by the means of raping him. He was just insecure and scared the uke would belong to someone else when he had his makeover and glow up. So he brought him back to the nerd style. Eww.
Chapter 2 is okay. It's funny. I'm just sort of distracted of the tall guys Angelina Jolie lips. Ehehehe (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜
Chapters 3 and 4 is about incest. FICTIONAL incest stories are fine with me. Yet this one seems unclear. I don't really understand if the uke is in love with the seme, his twin brother, or he is just really protective of him and he was under the influence of drugs when they had sex. So, I don't really know which is which.
Chapter 5 is also okay. Though I don't believe in love at first sight. Lust at first sight, for sure. Hahaha
Chapter 6 is okay, too. But one thing. I find it weird to say "I'd lick your teeth." Haha I've kissed, I've sucked, but I've never been told and never did I say I'll lick your teeth. Dunno how I'd feel about it if someone told me that. Hahaha
Chapter 7 is another NO. The seme already said it himself. He said, "Even though I really like you, I can't be nice to you." That's it. He doesn't treat the uke well and treats him as a toy and as an errand boy. Yet he hates it when others mistreat the uke. Just another selfish asshole. Hate guys like him. Like you can't do mean things to my uke. Only I can do it. Well. (︶︿︶)=凸

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    YAOI LOVER June 4, 2021 9:04 pm

    Woah u just said my mind's word. We think alike ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~