It's not bad, it just has trouble maintaining a consistent tone throughout the story, and it felt like certain moments that needed to happen... didn't. They weren't exactly plot-holes, but combined with the tone problems it was enough to make me confused. One shouldn't be confused on a smut piece. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
It's not bad, it just has trouble maintaining a consistent tone throughout the story, and it felt like certain moments that needed to happen... didn't. They weren't exactly plot-holes, but combined with the tone problems it was enough to make me confused. One shouldn't be confused on a smut piece. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍