Maybe it’s just me but I felt the beginning part was focused on Jamil and the end was focused on Pray. I mean it wasn’t my fav poly story or story in general due to the bland plot but I think they both got time in the spotlight and then they ended it all together. In the beginning it was about Jamil and Jan and then it was about Jan and Pray. And then the end was them all together. And their relationship is different but I think you all are missing the key factor here. Pray and Jan really lovey dovey because they both have actual feelings. They might seem closer to us because they share their feelings. Jamil and Jan’s relationship is different because Jamil isn’t like Pray in that sense. Jan and Jamil still love eachother but just because their relationship is different because of one aspect I don’t think Jan, Pray, or the author was treating Jamil like a “side piece” as some of the comments are saying. That’s my two cents anyways, it was a fine enough story.
Maybe it’s just me but I felt the beginning part was focused on Jamil and the end was focused on Pray. I mean it wasn’t my fav poly story or story in general due to the bland plot but I think they both got time in the spotlight and then they ended it all together. In the beginning it was about Jamil and Jan and then it was about Jan and Pray. And then the end was them all together. And their relationship is different but I think you all are missing the key factor here. Pray and Jan really lovey dovey because they both have actual feelings. They might seem closer to us because they share their feelings. Jamil and Jan’s relationship is different because Jamil isn’t like Pray in that sense. Jan and Jamil still love eachother but just because their relationship is different because of one aspect I don’t think Jan, Pray, or the author was treating Jamil like a “side piece” as some of the comments are saying. That’s my two cents anyways, it was a fine enough story.