Chapter 4, the latest update, feels so rushed. I mean it escalted so quickly, it's like three chapters were squeezed in this update. They could have elaborated and had many scenes that could build this series into somn better(not that im complaing that this isnt good, i just feel unsatified that they end up with each other just like that). Like for example the dude in the printing pub, they could have used him more to further show the possessiveness of the seme... Nonetheless it was a good story, was really hoping for somn more.
Rushed?
Chapter 4, the latest update, feels so rushed. I mean it escalted so quickly, it's like three chapters were squeezed in this update. They could have elaborated and had many scenes that could build this series into somn better(not that im complaing that this isnt good, i just feel unsatified that they end up with each other just like that). Like for example the dude in the printing pub, they could have used him more to further show the possessiveness of the seme... Nonetheless it was a good story, was really hoping for somn more.