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Tenshi-gao February 9, 2021 4:55 pm

First, amazing story. I absolutely loved it. The two main characters are adorable and it’s obvious that they love and care for each other....BUT...it’s far from a healthy relationship. Did anyone else notice how toxic the relationship actually was? With the Seme’s angry outburst and he pushed himself onto the Uke several times. Worst of all, the Uke just let him do it. They are like a fire, beautiful yet dangerous. The two have come a long way since the beginning, especially the Uke with his depression and suicidal thoughts, but they still have a long way to go and the Seme should definitely look into some angry management therapy. These problems do make the relationship more realistic, but that doesn’t make it any less toxic. The Seme has straight up raped and kidnapped the Uke and was forgiven way too easily for there to be any kind of repenting or growing.

All in all, it was a great story and I loved it. I would have just like to have seen some of these negative things fixed or being managed.

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