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Awful and way too rushed

narutolvr January 20, 2016 2:57 pm

Just the first story was enough to make me drop. I also don't usually comment when I don't finish a story I didn't like but this one bothered me enough to make me post lol. The art was pretty rough, which could have been overlooked with a decent plot or redeemable characters, but ch. 1 didn't have those either. I'm already not one for stories where the uke falls in love with the rapist seme, but this one takes the cake as being the worst. I mean, he falls in love the next day and confesses after a week (technically the 3rd time they even see each other)?!!!

Not to mention, the seme grabs an underaged kid, rapes him, and "rescues" him from someone who was going to do the same thing, then has the nerve to tell the kid to go help his dad. You're right, Mr. Rapist! I should help my dad! Nothing redeemable about him. And this rushed story didn't help me care for any of the characters, either.

Responses
    Shika April 10, 2016 5:03 pm

    Yea to be honest ch. 8 is the only one that seems to have a plot and is interesting.