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panties February 20, 2021 10:14 am

i got a few complaints, but i loved this story.

like the war part wasn’t really,,,explained??? like what happened after satan made that deal with god, what happened to that war?

and the pet thing with Gabriel. Gabriel barely showed up and did almost nothing. how does he feel?

there are so many amazing characters. i feel like the author showcased so many characters with so much potential but along the way just threw them aside.

THE LAST PART!!! what IS that thing?? god really just not gonna explain it? and the jae-lee or whatever his name was got tossed aside and you never learn whats happening on earth after the whole apocalypse thing.

thats all im gonna rant about, there are more but overall, pretty good read

TLDR; rushed parts everywhere.

Responses
    Ginginroot March 2, 2021 1:43 am

    This is how I felt after chapter 164, it felt like all the characters were suddenly cheapened for some bad plotwist(s). I seriously- feel like screaming now.

    panties March 2, 2021 7:40 pm
    This is how I felt after chapter 164, it felt like all the characters were suddenly cheapened for some bad plotwist(s). I seriously- feel like screaming now. Ginginroot

    EXACTLY! as much as i loved this story, everything was suddenly cheapened for no reason? there’s so many good characters, and it ended in a way where all those characters contributed to nothing.

    Haramea May 2, 2021 10:32 pm

    This is exactly what i complain about, the story was interesting, but rushed everywhere, can we talk about god too?? Who was on the point of retiring but then?? No??
    Ang Gabe, he found the thing he liked most in the whole universe but let it go???
    And the dude at the end just ran off somewhere??

    Why did it seemed like satan's powers were shifting from "i can undo Satan"s spells" to "but i can't beat Sherlyn or that kid coming from the human world??"

    What the heck is just what i'm feeling, like it could have been so much deeper (especiay satan/beel's relationship, they were besties and so close, then beel disapeared._.) but instead a lot was just skipped over...
    AND THAT'S TOO BAD BECAUSE IT COULD HAVE BEEN SO MUCH DEEPER!

    panties May 3, 2021 3:05 am
    This is exactly what i complain about, the story was interesting, but rushed everywhere, can we talk about god too?? Who was on the point of retiring but then?? No??Ang Gabe, he found the thing he liked most in... Haramea

    RIGHT IT STARTED OFF SO STRONG! and then you got all these unanswered questions midway. the author built up the tension wonderfully but then just forgot about it??? like they basically threw away all we know and started a new arc without finishing the original???

    THE CHARACTERS ARE SO AMAZING. THEY EACH GOT THEIR STORY! but the amount of characters were overwhelming i guess? you can tell since the author just stopped even mentioning them at a certain point.

    started off amazing but then ended it without completing anything, which is very disappointing. like it started off so good and ended it like that? i rather it had been dropped rather than ending it in a way that leaves more questions than answers.

    Haramea May 3, 2021 8:24 pm

    I KNOW RIGHTT!!!!!
    lIKE so many plot points were just balantly ignored and skipped on for no reason???
    and this is exactly why it's disapointing because we're showned so many stories, which never end.^.

    And i don't know if there were too many characters?? Like, Satan, sherlyn and beel could have been the three protag, but instead it was just satan and... i don't have the words i'm just sad :"))
    BUT IT WAS STILL GOOD NONTHELESS

    panties May 3, 2021 8:59 pm
    I KNOW RIGHTT!!!!!lIKE so many plot points were just balantly ignored and skipped on for no reason???and this is exactly why it's disapointing because we're showned so many stories, which never end.^.And i don'... Haramea

    YEAH IT WAS GOOD
    im still sad about how the side characters like beel literally got casted aside, we dont even know what happened at during the third time satan reset the timeline