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This story's not really all that impressive. It could've been but it was just... No buildu...

putputters November 12, 2012 10:26 am

This story's not really all that impressive. It could've been but it was just... No buildup, no real climax, and no real ending for either of the stories. Honestly, I was led to believe that Kokuei was the seme. Him gettin' in the cowgirl position on top of Kintarou was really unexpected. I mean, I like unexpected, but damn, seriously, Kintarou seems more like an uke imo. Kokuei's personality doesn't really fit the "being held" type (not really that there're official classifications, but ya'll know when ya can get a vibe from charas about what position [seme/uke] they are). And the backstories weren't even fully developed lol. Not a good yaoi overall, but okay to waste time with I guess.

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    :) January 12, 2013 8:00 pm

    I feel the same exacte way.